I'd like feedback on my article: Single is Diamond

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  1. Maria KLM profile image60
    Maria KLMposted 9 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Single is Diamond (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image97
    FatFreddysCatposted 9 months ago

    You need to improve your English, big time.

    1. Maria KLM profile image60
      Maria KLMposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      Yeah. Thank you for that compliment. I will try to learn and improve that language.

  3. Carb Diva profile image96
    Carb Divaposted 9 months ago

    The message that you are trying to share is very good. However, there are a few issues that you need to address to get past the QA process: (1) Your article is very short. (2) You have not used any photographs or graphic images--they DO help. (3) English is not your first language. You have some grammatical errors that could easily be fixed. (4) Most content is viewed on personal devices (phones, etc.) and so it is helpful to use Subtitles to break up your content would be helpful.

  4. Marisa Wright profile image95
    Marisa Wrightposted 9 months ago

    If you want to make money on HubPages, you need to be able to write long, information-rich articles in grammatically correct English.   The articles need to be nicely illustrated with photos you have a legal right to use.

    Unfortunately your English is far below the standard needed to be accepted on HubPages, so you would be better off looking elsewhere for a home for your articles.

  5. lisavollrath profile image95
    lisavollrathposted 9 months ago

    You should probably be aware that HubPages is not a blogging platform. This is a place to write long, informative, media-rich articles.

    As others have pointed out, this piece is way too short, lacks any images or video, and is just a solid block of text. Also, your written English skills are not good enough to pass QA. Your grammar needs work, and your phrasing is awkward. You need a native speaking English editor to review your work before you post it.

 
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