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I'd like feedback on my article: Health Benefits of Tuberose Essential Oil

  1. Hareepriyaw profile image49
    Hareepriyawposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Health Benefits of Tuberose Essential Oil. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      No intro sad

      Move the video and photo down the page. Include a source with your image.

      Include scientific references to back up the health claims you make.

    2. Mandy Mason Marti profile image60
      Mandy Mason Martiposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hello, I would like to know more about this oil... I have been using coco butter for years and love it but always ready for knowledge.

      1. Mandy Mason Marti profile image60
        Mandy Mason Martiposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

        I love the smell of Gardenia's. What is the fragrance?

  2. psycheskinner profile image82
    psycheskinnerposted 3 weeks ago

    If you are making medical claims you need to provide your credential and/or your sources that provide the necessary proof.  Or you need to make less emphatic claims.

  3. AliciaC profile image99
    AliciaCposted 3 weeks ago

    In addition to what others have said, the image imprinted with the name of a website should be replaced. I think the use of paragraphs instead of just a list of points would also be helpful.

    1. Hareepriyaw profile image49
      Hareepriyawposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Some people like to have points to easily read and some like to read paragraphs. So, I thought it is better to put the data that is suitable for the current article such that it can satisfy major part of the audience. Am I right?

      1. AliciaC profile image99
        AliciaCposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

        Hi, Hareepriyaw. Yes, I think point form can be helpful for the reader. I think you need at least some paragraphs in addition to your points, though. For example, as theraggededge has said, an introduction (in the form of a paragraph) would be good. A paragraph for a conclusion would be good, too.

        1. Hareepriyaw profile image49
          Hareepriyawposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

          Sure, thank you.

 
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