I'd like feedback on my article:know about anemia

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  1. Ishak azmy profile image60
    Ishak azmyposted 10 months ago

    take a look and tell me what is the problem

    1. K S Lane profile image94
      K S Laneposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Ishak,
      I think your main issue is grammar and spelling. Also, your article really isn't long enough. Shorter articles are okay, but it's better to aim for over 1000 words.

      1. Ishak azmy profile image60
        Ishak azmyposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        thank you

  2. DrMark1961 profile image97
    DrMark1961posted 10 months ago

    If you are a medical student, you must realize that this brief paper is sadly lacking. It does not provide any information that is not out there on trusted sites and no one would bother to visit it.
    Do you start out sentences and write titles like that when you submit a paper to your professor? What about the subtitles?
    What is the significance of the photo when you do not even bother to discuss treatment?
    If you do not submit quality articles that are comprehensive, you are unlikely to be pass the QAP and even less likely to ever have page views. This needs a lot of work, and not just because it is too short.

    1. Ishak azmy profile image60
      Ishak azmyposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      thank you , but i think the youth react with photos more than words

      1. theraggededge profile image97
        theraggededgeposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        Maybe, but HubPages does not agree with you. HubPages wants informative, well-written, magazine-style articles written by people who clearly have expertise in the topic.

      2. DrMark1961 profile image97
        DrMark1961posted 10 months agoin reply to this

        If that is the case, and you really do not know how to use words, you would be better off posting a Youtube video and not trying to attract "youth" with this subject;


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