I'd like feedback on my article: Tips for Travelling in India

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  1. Shashank Mittal profile image68
    Shashank Mittalposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Tips for Travelling in India (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hello again.

      You need to add an introduction to explain what the article is about.

      Check for random capitalisation errors. Place names should always begin with an upper case letter.

      Use title case for your subtitles.

      Could you use your own photos? In a travel article, it's important to show you have experience of the things you are writing about.

      Hope that helps.

      1. Shashank Mittal profile image68
        Shashank Mittalposted 12 months agoin reply to this

        Hello There,

        Thank you for your the constructive criticism. I have tried to make the desired changes and corrected a few errors. Also have added some personal photos taken by me on various trips around the country. It really helped.
        Thanks Again

  2. Luke Holm profile image96
    Luke Holmposted 12 months ago

    Hello Shashank Mittal, this article is much better than your last. You are getting better, so keep working hard! I think you are probably pretty close to getting this article published.

    Just from skimming over the article, you still have odd capitalization errors (sometimes words are capitalized mid sentence). You want to capitalize all the major words of your subtitles. You also have some spacing errors between paragraphs, which wouldn't hurt to fix. Aside from that, I would reread your article aloud to see what makes sense and what doesn't. Your syntax is off, but not by much (maybe it's not syntax, but rather your wording). Let me show you what I mean (your opening lines):

    "Here are some very specific tips for people who are looking to backpack for India. There are some very basic things to keep in mind and rest assure you will have the most colorful time of your life."

    Here is how I might try to improve this capsule:

    In this article, I will share specific tips for people planning a backpacking adventure across India. When traveling throughout India, there are some unique cultural norms to keep in mind. If you follow these rules, I assure you that you will have best time of your life.


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