Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The Wonders of Writing. What can I do to improve? Thanks!
The ratings capsule at the bottom of your article is only used for recipes. You need to delete it.
Subtitles need to follow APA case. Getting you started, for example, should be Getting You Started. There is a tool you can use to check your subtitles at https://capitalizemytitle.com/
Is this the article rejected for spammy elements? The only thing I can find on there that is definitely against the rules is the ratings capsule. Good luck submitting it again.
I encourage you to keep writing as it seems to be therapeutic for you, but if you want to be published you will have to work on your grammar.
To be published on a platform such as HubPages your command of the English language needs to be close to perfect; your skill falls short. Improve your grammar and you will achieve your goal.
I have taken a couple of samples. The first is a complete re-write to shorten your text and make it crisper. The second sample I have mostly just corrected for grammar. It would be improved by making sentences shorter, active, and more direct.
"I am doing this to share the goodness I experienced when I inked my thoughts. I believe it is worth sharing the encounter. Also, I would surely stop from doing this if it did nothing well on me. So I just hope you would agree with me or somehow be inspired to write more and for those who are not writing yet, hopefully, this could get you to this hobby."
I want to share the positive effects writing has had for me. I would not do this if writing didn’t help me. So, I hope you will be inspired to write as a hobby.
I know most of us write because it has been our passion. But for sure behind this is also a mission. A lot of us write because we want to share some expertise. Others would share some experiences. There are also those who want to tell the world how wonderful nature is and how nice to travel. And there are also those who want to present how delectable their dish is.
I know most of us write because it is our passion. But, behind this is also a mission. A lot of us write because we want to share some expertise; others like to share experiences. There are also those who want to tell the world how wonderful nature is and how nice it is to travel. And there are also those who want to present how delectable their dish is. (The last sentence doesn’t really make much sense; “present how delectable their dish is” sounds like something you would write about a recipe).
I hope this helps
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