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  1. Kristen Howe profile image71
    Kristen Howeposted 6 years ago

    Last week, I've submitted my 9 Ways to Stay Warm This Winter, to HealDove, which was forwarded to RemedyGrove, and they passed on it. They said they're looking for evergreen hubs, but said my ideas were lovely.  I'm looking for ideas to improve my hub to resubmit this spring. It's been proofed too. Here's the link:  https://hubpages.com/health/9-Ways-to-W … his-winter

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    1. theraggededge profile image83
      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Kristen, hope you are well smile

      You need to number your subtitles 1 - 9. It looks to me like you have repeated yourself. There are two sections on 'bundling up' and two on cuddling up to other people.

      The paragraph under "Beat the Cold" needs proofreading. Read it out loud and you'll see what I mean.

      Good luck with this, I know you have worked hard on it.

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  2. Kristen Howe profile image71
    Kristen Howeposted 6 years ago

    HI Bev. I'm doing good and staying warm over here in Ohio.  Okay. Maybe easy fixes to work on next month. I did it run through the Hub's spellchecker. Hmm. I'll give it a new try in March.

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    1. Eurofile profile image72
      Eurofileposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I agree about numbering your subtitles. I also wonder whether you could split your polls so they are not together and add some more photos. A lot of articles seem to start with an eye-catching photo.

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  3. Kristen Howe profile image71
    Kristen Howeposted 6 years ago

    Thanks Eurofile. Duly noted.

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  4. Venkatachari M profile image91
    Venkatachari Mposted 6 years ago

    Your article is quite good with useful tips.

    I think you may elaborate the ashtanga yoga part a bit further with guidelines for doing it.

    You may want to change that sub-title: "Crockpots are perfect for making Hot Apple Cider"  with some better title making it a general one to apply to Cocoa and other drinks also.

    Remove that duplicate sentence- (Hot cocoa could also benefit your skin too) at the start in the next sub-title (Get Steamed with a Sauna).

    Include some more appealing winter (warmup) images.

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  5. Kristen Howe profile image71
    Kristen Howeposted 6 years ago

    Thanks Venka. I don't have the website where I've gotten the yoga information with me on hand. But I see if I can expand on it.

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