I'd like feedback on my article: The Secret to Giving Your Child the Keys to...

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   chad040703posted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: The Secret to Giving Your Child the Keys to Happiness & Success (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      Just giving feedback on the images. They are too small. Replace them with larger, all-the-same-size photos. Do not add borders. Cite the source and make sure they are legal-to-use. That Anne Geddes one looks a bit dodgy
      
      Oh, and break up those huge paragraphs into shorter ones. One idea = one paragraph.
      
      You've put a ton of work into this, so sorry I haven't time to read it properly right now. Hopefully you'll get feedback from others.

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         chad040703posted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback.  I have to figure out how to make the pictures bigger.  I am not tech savvy, unfortunately, and I will be careful with picture choices.  Thank you.

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            theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            If you use images from Pixabay, Pexels or Unsplash, you will be fine. And if you always download the same size....
            
            Try to include the owner's name and the url of the image. Restrict to using two from each site as HubPages doesn't like more than two links to the same domain.
            
            For your article, despite its length, you don't need lots of images anyway.

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   I have two other suggestions in addition to what theraggededge has said. You need to include information about the product that you are advertising in the Amazon capsule. You should describe the book and explain why it's useful.
   
   At the moment, there's an incomplete paragraph found on other sites above the Amazon capsule, which looks strange.
   
   If possible, it would be good to place references and links to other hubs at the end of your article so that readers aren't tempted to leave the article before they've finished reading it.

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   mireland19posted 5 years ago

   There are sites where you can find public domain and creative commons photos. In fact, Google has a filter where you can find images that are legal to use. I still go to the actual page and check the licence to be safe.

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   chad040703posted 5 years ago

   Thank you all for your support and informative suggestions.  I truly appreciate it, as it seems like Latin to me!  I am passionate about the material, but struggling with the formality of constructing a platform.  Thank you for your help and stay healthy and safe!!

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