I'd like feedback on my article: How to master the Law of Attraction

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   Alnajda95posted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: How to master the Law of Attraction (must be signed in to view)

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      OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      This topic is over-saturated and stale.  The law of attraction was very popular years ago.  I don't know if anyone would be searching for it nowadays and even if they were, there are already tens of thousands of articles written on this topic already. 
      
      Rather than spending a lot of time trying to improve an article that will never perform well for you, you should instead use that time to find another topic that is more current to write about.

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   In order to get the article featured, I think you'll need to correct the language and punctuation errors. There shouldn't be a space before a period (full stop) or comma, but there should be one afterwards. The bold section should probably be changed to plain text. Using the capitalization style recommended by the APA in titles and subtitles might be helpful.
   
   In addition, you need to make sure that the photos have a suitable license for use on HubPages and indicate this in the source. The first photo is sold by stock agencies and shouldn't be used unless you've bought it. The same rule applies to the other photos.

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   Alnajda95posted 5 years ago

   Thanks so much , okay I am more clear now when it comes to the language and punctuations , but as for the photos ... is not it allowed to put the pics downloaded from your laptop or device? And what source should i indicate? I have taken all of them from google .

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      AliciaCposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi. Images must have a public domain or a Creative Commons commercial license, unless you took a photo yourself or have permission from the photographer.
      
      If you use Google Images to find a photo, you should use its "Usage Rights" filter to find photos with a suitable license. After you've entered a search term, you need to choose "Advanced Search" under the Settings menu to find the filter.
      
      The following article from the HubPages Learning Center should be helpful with respect to image use and citing sources.
      
      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

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         Alnajda95posted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you very much,I understand it very well now. ))

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   Kenna McHughposted 5 years ago

   You need to edit your bio because, all due respect, what makes you think you know about this topic?

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      Alnajda95posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Bio on my profile ? Or bio regarding the article ? Ps: it's been only 5 days since l have joined hubpages.l apologize guys, for making many questions .☺️

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