I'd like feedback on my article: Five beautiful hostrical places you can find...

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   Ashly Rposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Five beautiful hostrical places you can find in Al- Yemen (must be signed in to view)

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      quotationsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Your article is interesting and I had never heard of these sites. However the information you provide on each attraction is somewhat scanty.
      
      Also, it is unrealistic for you to say people should visit Yemen considering the civil war, and for westerners especially this would not be a good idea. The fact that you don't even mention the fighting or the famine makes the article misleading or delusional.
      
      You also have many grammatical and spelling errors. Even your article's title has a mistake: "Historical" not "Hostrical". Try running your article through a spellchecker and a grammar checker. Also, give provide credits for the photos and only use ones you have permission to use.

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      Cushman Fredricksposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Nice but you need someone to proofread. The standard for English is very very high on HubPages.

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   theraggededgeposted 5 years ago

   Ashly... it's 'Historical'.
   
   Edit: I took a quick look. Your images aren't credited. There are numerous spelling errors and typos, along with grammatical issues.
   
   Also, I doubt if anyone wants to visit Yemen right now

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      Ashly Rposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Right ..Maybe you don't want to visit Yemen right now because of the current situation,but invite you to visit in the near feature...why my image aren't credited!!

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         theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         You can't just take images from the internet. They have to have a Creative Commons License or be in the Public Domain.
         
         You should link back to the source in order to show that you have used them legally. Or, better still, use photos you have taken yourself.
         
         https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

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            Ashly Rposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            All thanks for you ..but where I can find pictures that They have to have a Creative Commons License or be in the Public Domain!!

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               AliciaCposted 5 years agoin reply to this

               The link that theraggededge provides lists some good image sources. Pixabay is a great place to get public domain photos, but we need to make sure that we avoid the line of stock agency photos that appears when we search for an image on a particular topic. Wikimedia Commons is good, too, but we need to check the license carefully. I've found that the site sometimes provides Flickr images that no longer have a suitable license.

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         psycheskinnerposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         You don't say where you got the pictures.  They need to be public domain or used according to an appropriate license.

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         DrMark1961posted 5 years agoin reply to this

         You mean the civil war?

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   Ashly Rposted 5 years ago

   Call it as what you want but one day will return as it was safe and everything will be ok

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   Marisa Writesposted 5 years ago

   Ashly, I am sorry but your English is not good enough to write for HubPages.  This is a site for fluent English speakers.  Your spelling and grammar are far below the standard required and until you can improve them, your articles will not be approved.

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