I'd like feedback on my article: Who Is He, Miner of Donbas?

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   Nikolas Turustusposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Who Is He, Miner of Donbas? (must be signed in to view)

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      OldRosesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      What does the video about landmines have to do with coal mining?  I think that you are confusing different meanings of the word "mine".  When the word mine is used in the term landmine, it refers to explosives that are buried very shallowly and are triggered by someone stepping on them.  They are a weapon of war.  Landmines have nothing to do with coal mines.  Coal mines, or other types of activities that extract minerals from the earth, are not explosives.  They are holes dug into the ground to get at coal or diamonds or copper or gold.  Same word, two very differenct meanings.

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         Nikolas Turustusposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks for difference between mines and landmines. Yours

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   Hi. You've written an informative article. Here are some changes that may be helpful.
   
   Each of the sections from Triandis and Suh in your first text capsule is found on multiple websites. It's not a good idea to include duplicate content in an article, except for short quotations, especially at the start of an article.
   
   You should go through the article carefully and correct the English errors. The bold formatting should be reduced.
   
   You should also state the source and license of the photos. It looks a bit strange that the subtitle of the first photo capsule is so similar to the title of the article. A caption for the photo would be better than a subtitle.
   
   Removing the spaces in the article may be helpful.
   
   In addition, you should note the comment about the video provided by OldRoses.

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   Nikolas Turustusposted 4 years ago

   My deepest thanks. Yours

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   Nikolas Turustusposted 4 years ago

   Sorry, what's the difference between subtitle and caption?

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      AliciaCposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      A subtitle is the title of a capsule. It's written in big print at the top of the capsule. A caption goes immediately under a photo and is written in small print. You can find these areas when you click on "Edit" for a photo.

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         Nikolas Turustusposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Probably, they may coincide in form and meaning?

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            AliciaCposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            No, that would be unnecessary duplication. You shouldn't use both a subtitle and a caption in a photo capsule. You need to choose one of them. My preference is for a caption.
            
            You may found some helpful information in this article about image use from the Learning Center. It discusses the use of captions. https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

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   Nikolas Turustusposted 4 years ago

   Yes, I read, you are my lighthouse!

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