I'd like feedback on my article: How I make Money Working Online- See Earnings!

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  1. tammyfrost profile image83
    tammyfrostposted 3 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: How I make Money Working Online- See Earnings!

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    1. Abby Slutsky profile image92
      Abby Slutskyposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Well, I think both books will definitely get snipped. I agree that you do not provide any personal information on how you use them, and your title does not get the reader ready to make purchases. There are a lot of grammar errors.  Line 3, I think in the first paragraph should be "make" instead of "makes". I would break up that first paragraph, so it is not so long. You need a space between "&" and Earnings. Earnings needs a capital letter, and I would probably write out "and". There were a number of other verb tense mistakes. With some effort, you can fix this. .

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  2. AliciaC profile image93
    AliciaCposted 3 years ago

    Hi, Tammy. First, I think you need to remove the Amazon links because you don’t describe the books or give your opinion about their benefits and drawbacks. Next, you need to remove the self-promotional parts from the article, including the photo of your website, the link to it, and other points.

    I’m not sure how useful information from 2011 and 2012 will be to readers. It might be better to focus on recent information instead of facts from eight years ago, which may no longer be relevant. If the facts are still relevant for today’s readers, I think you need to reword and reformat the article in some way in order to include them. I’m not saying that this is the case, but the fact that there’s an eight-year gap in your records suggests that you weren’t interested in the topic during that time. That’s probably not a good impression to give to readers, even though you do give an explanation in the article.

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  3. tammyfrost profile image83
    tammyfrostposted 3 years ago

    @Abby and Alicia.... Thank-you so much for your feed back. I will certainly change things like you two have suggested. smile

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