How to improve my article

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   jacobkuttytaposted 4 years ago

   My article that was featured now turned not featured after some editing.  What is wrong with it.  Please suggest:
   
   https://hubpages.com/health/How-to-deal … ms-in-life
   
   Thanks in advance for your suggestions.

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   theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

   Hi Jacob,
   
   Remove the question mark from the title. You aren't asking a question.
   
   Break up the long text capsules into shorter ones with relevant sub-headings.
   
   Use photos without watermarks that are legal to use (that watermarked image is probably why your article has been unfeatured). Try Pixabay. And make sure you credit the owner in the image capsule.
   
   If you are unsure about how to use images, read this article from the Learning Center: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
   
   Good luck.

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      jacobkuttytaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you very much for the information. Noted your points.  I appreciate your help and taking time to go through the article and post the suggestions. It requires a good hart to do that.  Blessings.

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   The sections referring to God might be a problem. The article should probably be moved to the religion category or the religious aspects should be removed or at least shortened. Not everyone believes in God or would agree with the points that you've raised about your religion.
   
   Since you've written about health, authoritative references would be a good addition to the article. I think it's important that you support the ideas that "poverty-stricken...people develop minor problems" and that "poor people are poor just because they are not prepared to face challenges or problems which wealthy people are ready to face" with references, Those are sweeping statements that probably need to be reworded. I think you would have to explore many societies in many countries in order to make the claims, and even then you couldn't be certain that it applies to every situation of poverty.

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      jacobkuttytaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Alice, for checking the article and provide the tips for improvement. It requires a good heart to take time and check the article and then highlight the corrections. Thanks a Lot. May God Bless you. The main purpose of the article is to bring people to Jesus. If I withdraw God part, then there is no point in writing this article. Jesus loves you and only His teachings and principles are a immense help to leading a good life.  Any way Thanks for the highlighted points.  Blessings. Jesus Loves You.

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         theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Then you should change it to the Religious category, Jacob. It won't be approved for Health.

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