I'd like feedback on my article: The Top 10 Things To Know About Nigeria

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   unwanamikeposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: The Top 10 Things To Know About Nigeria (must be signed in to view)

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      Shuan Brownposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Hubbers.
      Your article is not really rich enough.
      Your introduction did not capture your write up.
      The current suggests recent happenings like tourism, culture,investment but you didn't.
      From what you wrote, the likely fitting title should be like "historical facts about Nigeria" or something like that
      Conclusion almost absent.
      Do not use call out at the beginning of article.
      Lots of grammatical errors try now plus.net
      
      Your article was rich but lacked substance.......I mean what will attract readership
      
      I wish you success

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      Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      unwanami, as a fellow Nigerian, all the facts you stated in the article can be found online.                                          I think you should get an unique angle to the story. Like for example, your visit and experience at the Bar Beach or the Yakari Game Reserve. That could impact interest and curiousity!                                         Seriously, I don't think you've done enough research on the Nigerian currency. Professor Ofornagoro's "Trade and Imperialism in Southern Nigeria" is a clue. Here you'll facinate your readers with the development and significance of the Naira before 1973 via, the Central Bank of Nigeria.                                         These are just few of the area that needs changes. Good success!

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   I think your article could be very useful as well as interesting. It needs to be expanded and edited, though.
   
   One problem is that it doesn’t look good to have only one sentence under a subtitle. Adding information to the short sections in the article could be helpful. Another change that could be helpful is to explain how much the naira and kobo are in U.S currency. Pictures of Nigeria that have a suitable license might be interesting for readers.
   
   In the last section, you say that some parts of Nigeria are dangerous for visitors and others are safer. Going into more detail here would be useful for people who are thinking of visiting the country. If you do add information about safety to the article, you should also add references and a disclaimer.
   
   Your need to go through the article carefully in order to correct the English errors. I think you mean a hospitable hotel instead of a hospital one, for example.

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   unwanamikeposted 4 years ago

   I feel happy for your advice! Thanks

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   Kenna McHughposted 4 years ago

   Your bio needs fitting. Are you from Nigeria? Traveled there? What makes you an expert?
   
   Also, you need an introduction that explains why the reader should read your article.

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   unwanamikeposted 4 years ago

   Thanks

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