I'd like feedback on my article: Immunity and Vaccines

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   Constant Jumaposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Immunity and Vaccines

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   Hi. The article contains some English errors. In addition, your article is about immunity and vaccines, yet you’ve shown a photo of a mask that contains advice to wear one. The word “mask” appears nowhere in your article.
   
   I think a major problem is the article’s lack of references. It’s very important that a health article contains authoritative references to support the information in the article.

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   CYong74posted 4 years ago

   Such topics, even if approved, are unlikely to get you much traffic or earnings. Because you will be competing with hundreds of major news and medical sites.
   
   The sensitive topic also means HP will be triply strict. Frankly, I suggest you forget about it.

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   Constant Jumaposted 4 years ago

   Thanks for your feedback, I got to edit it and improve on 5he pointed areas

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   Urwa786posted 4 years ago

   Should your article not be Featured, you can boost its quality (and odds of being Featured) by
   Making sure that your title is short and descriptive
   Presenting information that cannot be found elsewhere online
   Presenting concrete facts, figures, and data
   Providing a pleasant reading experience via attractive, easy-to-skip around formatting
   Utilizing a wide variety of capsules
   Making an effort to include many superb images
   Editing your text (or having someone else edit it)
   Avoiding spammy elements

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      Constant Jumaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      How do I add photos in between subtitles instead of just having one photo at the start of the article or at the end.

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   theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

   Break your text up into several text capsules, then you can insert image capsules in between them.
   
   All images must carry a Creative Commons license, be in the Public Domain, or belong to you. They should be credited and linked back to the original source and the license included if necessary. You can't just copy them from the internet.
   
   Read the articles in the Learning Center (Help, top right) to learn how to use formatting and images correctly.
   
   You must ensure your work is original and not copied from elsewhere. Add your credentials (as related to the topic) in the article bio.
   
   Good luck.

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      Constant Jumaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks

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   Lady Dazyposted 4 years ago

   I am new here myself and I understand how difficult it can be as a newbie. I have read your article and it seems very good to me. This is a subject that the whole world is interested in at the moment and I am sure it will attract many readers.

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      Constant Jumaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks

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