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   Eric Cauncaposted 3 years ago

   https://discover.hubpages.com/education … ying-Birds

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      erorantesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Good morning Mister Eric. I was reading your article. It is well inform. I like it. I love to see the birds that are not harmful to other animals. I like your pictures. You have your numbers backwards when you listed the birds from One to ten. I see a few grammar errors. English rules are a plus for a good article. You need to proofread your article. Some of your sentences have comma error. For example , you have comma splices and you also have run on sentences. Your information is excellent.

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   Ryan Corneliusposted 3 years ago

   Very nice article. I love the fact that you focused on giving enough. I didn't know those high fliers existed. If anything to make it better I'd say to not give too much. Give enough so they are eager for the next you write. Good stuff

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   EricDockettposted 3 years ago

   I'd remove those H2 headers from the image capsules and add them to the text capsule. This will make it easier for search engines to associate the H2 with the corresponding text.
   
   Change "Top 10 highest flying birds in the world:" in your first text capsule to an H3.
   
   Add the name of the bird to your image description. You've done this with some but not all. Image descriptions on HP also serves as image alt tags.
   
   You have many typos and spelling errors. Tighten that up. Try ProWritingAid or Grammarly if you have trouble hunting them down.
   
   I'd reword that first paragraph.  It seems clunky, especially the description of what a bird looks like.
   
   These are minor issues you can easily fix. The core of your article is very good, and interesting to people like me who like birds.
   
   Well done!

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   Eric Cauncaposted 3 years ago

   Hi. Thanks for your feedback.
   
   @ericdockett: What are the H2 and H3? Thanks

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      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      They are headings. If you highlight a portion of text in a capsule, then click on the 'paragraph' dropdown menu, you will see the options there. It means you can put a subheading right in the middle of a text capsule if you want to.
      
      Play around to see how it works.

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         Eric Cauncaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Hi, thank you.  I get it. There is also a heading button on the Hub tool. Thank you, Bev.

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   Nazmunnposted 3 years ago

   Hi Eric,
   Thanks for sharing your article. It was interesting. I got to know about whooper swan. I liked it. Thanks again.

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