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   DD Mazumdarposted 2 years ago

   Please help me to improve my article https://discover.hubpages.com/travel/To … al-Pradesh thus I can submit it in the Wander Wisdom for consiration.

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      I am going to assume that the text is original to you, although it seemed in some places that you were quoting without attribution because the writing style was very different in areas. Ignoring that issue, I would say that you should probably re-frame your article. No one in the west is going to know where or what this province is and so instead of just jumping into describing some of its more interesting areas, you should spend some time introducing it properly, I would also suggest a different title. No one in English speaking countries outside of India and Pakistan would know of this place and so they would never search for this  subject. You should try to find a title for something they might search for or that would be more interesting and so more likely to make them click on a link.
      
      There are also other issues. Your article is about 4 places. But the introductory sentence says "Here are the top 3 places to visit in Arunachal Pradesh."
      
      Also, you sometimes use what is perhaps hinglish but is not standard English. For example, "tribular cultures" is not correct English. Tribular is an obsolete form of tribal and is jarring to any native English speaker who finds this word. They will probably stop reading here, fearing that the rest of the article will use non-standard English, which is cacophonous to a fluent speaker.
      
      You also introduce concepts without explaining them. For example: "The library of the monastery has invaluable ancient documents, mainly Kangyur and Tengyur." You do not explain what the last 2 things are, which is off-putting since no one in the West would know what this is.

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   DD Mazumdarposted 2 years ago

   Thanks for your valuable suggestions. Will follow these and venture to reframe the article as suggested. Thanks again.

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   You should also make sure that you have the right to use each photograph and state the name of the photographer and the license of the photo. If you took the photos, you should say so. The last two photographs are watermarked, which implies that they aren't suitable for use on this site.

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