I'd like feedback on my article: Why Smart TV Is a Game Changer in the...

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  1. Nyamweya profile image60
    Nyamweyaposted 9 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Why Smart TV Is a Game Changer in the Technology World

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    1. OldRoses profile image95
      OldRosesposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      I agree with Beth.  Smart TVs are actually old tech now.  If you want to write about tech, write about new and emerging technologies.

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    2. WriterJanis profile image91
      WriterJanisposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      Hi!
      I see you 've changed the title of your article. That's a good start. Your article appears to be short on your word count. It should be at least 700 words. Also, you need to properly credit your picture and make sure it has the proper license for usage.

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  2. Beth Eaglescliffe profile image93
    Beth Eaglescliffeposted 9 months ago

    My first thought when I read your title was that Smart TVs are not new. They have been on retail sale in UK since 2007, and maybe even earlier in the US. So why write about them being a gamechanger now? That's old news.

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  3. AliciaC profile image93
    AliciaCposted 9 months ago

    I think the title could be simplified. There are a few grammar mistakes in the article. I think you also need to rewrite the conclusion as well. I have no intention of getting a smart TV, since I have a tablet and a phone. I understand that a smart TV could be useful for some people, though.

    Have you done research to discover whether people in all the remote areas in your country can make use of every channel of a smart TV? If you have, you should state this.

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  4. Anja anj profile image74
    Anja anjposted 9 months ago

    I think it would be better to put a space between each words.. It's Easy for everyone to read..

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