My 4 articles are Featured

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   Pari bilalposted 18 months ago

   My 4th article has been published and featured, and I am excited to share my feelings with my Hubber fellows.
   Please have a look at my articles, Thanks

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      Justine Guiaoposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Congratulations!

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         Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         Thanks Justine!
         Even after putting in a lot of effort into writing different articles, I have finally learned a little bit more about how to increase my chances of being accepted by HubPages. As I checked, my fifth article has also been published. This experience has provided valuable lessons and allowed me to make progress in understanding the requirements for successful publication on HubPages.

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      Khanmaria12posted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Congratulations

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         Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         Thanks Maria!

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      Miebakagh57posted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Congratulations! I like the poems. But stop copying others.

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         Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         The poem “Daffodils” I studied in my 10th-grade textbook. It was all time my favorite poem.
         I didn’t realize that posting the poem on this platform would offend a lot of people.
         Thanks for reading.

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            theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

            Analysis of popular poetry is fine. As long as your own text is in-depth with intelligent observations and interpretations. It isn't offensive.
            
            The only time you should avoid it is if the poem is copyrighted. Therefore always make sure it's okay to reproduce it. A good place to check is Wikipedia: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_Wandere … as_a_Cloud If it's there, then you can write about it, with the poem in full.
            
            If you can't find it freely available online, then don't republish it. Same with song lyrics. They are usually copyrighted.

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               Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

               Yes, that’s right! Thanks for adding to my knowledge about that. I will be careful in the future.
               I have already edited articles on the poems ‘Daffodils’ and ‘The Road Not Taken,’ translating the poems and writing extensive analyses on both.
               Please visit my articles.

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   AliciaCposted 18 months ago

   Pari, you can’t publish poems written by other people here. The only way they would be accepted is if you analyze them within the article, and the analysis must be longer than the poem.

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      Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks, Alice, for guiding me. I will edit my articles by analyzing these poems.

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      Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … s-a-cloudd

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   FatFreddysCatposted 18 months ago

   Oh, snap. Busted.

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      Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      “I am a newbie here, so I don’t know all the protocols yet.”
      You can go for my other articles.
      Pls visit , read & leave comments.

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         OldRosesposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         You really should spend some time reading the articles in the Learning Center (Help button in the upper right corner of your screen) BEFORE attempting to publish on HubPages.  Those articles will tell you everything you need to know to publish on this platform.

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   Pari bilalposted 18 months ago

   Yes already on it. Thanks for reading.

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   theraggededgeposted 18 months ago

   Don't put your titles in quotes
   
   Unless you are actually quoting something within the title; for example: My Sister Told Me Her "Little Secret"

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      Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for correcting this. I will not make this mistake again. Your guidance is generous.

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   AliciaCposted 18 months ago

   I think you need a brief introduction to your poetry articles. You can say something along the lines of “I find the poem very interesting. I quote it below and then discuss it.” I’m sure you could write something better. The introduction shouldn’t be exactly the same in each article.
   
   Another point is that there should be a photo at or near the start with a suitable license to attract attention. The “suitable licenses” are discussed in the “Help” section of this site.

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      Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      “I didn’t do it because I thought it would give the idea of blogs, and on HubPages, we are supposed to write articles. So I structured the whole thing in a way that would give it an article structure.”
      “And the other point is genuine. I will keep it in mind next time I write articles.”

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         AliciaCposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         An analysis of a poem is an article. It’s up to you what you do, but I think you may lose readers when they see a poem that they are familiar with without an introduction explaining what you are going to do.

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   PaulGoodman67posted 18 months ago

   I think "Daffodils" is too old to be covered by copyright. I still wouldn't duplicate it in its entirety, though.
   
   My father grew up in Grasmere, not far from Dove Cottage, Wordsworth's house, which is on the outskirts of the village.
   
   Wordsworth was surprised by the spectacle of the daffodils but I don't believe that he was "wandering aimlessly" as you wrote. He was on one of the walks that he did regularly through the Eden Valley, as far as I'm aware, between Pooley Bridge and Grasmere.
   
   A big problem you've got with the subject matter is that the poem is one of the most famous in the English language and therefore has already been covered extensively by others.
   
   I think you need to do more than merely reproduce the poem and provide a short, flowery description of it (sorry for the pun!).

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      Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      I wrote “aimlessly” because he was walking with his sister when they encountered a field of daffodils and were captivated by their beauty. It is not explicitly mentioned whether the walk was aimless or had a specific purpose.
      And yes, you are right. I should cover a different topic instead of poems.
      Thanks for showing your concern and giving good advice.

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   Pari bilalposted 18 months ago

   You are right. I am thinking to delete Daffodils article because it’s not up to mark.

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      theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      That's your decision, but know that you learn more from the 'bad' articles than you learn from the 'good' ones

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         Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         Yes right. I also thought that it wasn’t exactly what it should be.

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            PaulGoodman67posted 18 months agoin reply to this

            I see no reason to delete it. However, I think this forum thread gives you food for thought for your next venture.

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               Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

               Yes, I am grateful for all of you and your time in correcting my articles. After realizing the mistakes in that particular article, I have decided that I do not like it. I will strive to create something more genuine and valuable for the readers. Please check my future articles as well. Thank you!

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   Pari bilalposted 18 months ago

   https://discover.hubpages.com/health/ho … y-daughter

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      theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Ok, I have some suggestions...
      
      Always, without fail, add a credit to your image. It would look like,
      
      "Image courtesy of **name** via Pixabay"
      
      Or "Public Domain Image".
      
      Or "Image from **site** under a Creative Commons license"
      
      Or "Photo author's own".
      
      Then put the url of the image in the appropriate box. Unless it is your own photo.
      
      The article needs an extra section. At the moment it ends with the 'nightmare' sentence leaving the reader wondering. How is your daughter now? How do you manage her condition? Is she back to her happy self?
      
      The Learning Center has all the information you need.

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         Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         Edited the story. Thanks a lot for your precious time.

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            Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

            I will write another article about how I managed her sugar and other details because it needs a whole article to be descriptive.

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               Khanmaria12posted 18 months agoin reply to this

               My suggestion is to edit again and tell the detail in this article, because people won't search for part 2. And secondly, lengthy articles produce good CPM, its my opinion. Unfortunately I don't write lengthy articles, but you have a story to tell

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                  Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

                  This article was actually about what I went through.
                  But thanks for your suggestions.
                  I am on it to revise this article, and let me rethink where I can incorporate the missing information.

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                     Khanmaria12posted 18 months agoin reply to this

                     Yes dear, you can do it. It's well written but left questions what happened next. I hope you will manage well

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                        Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

                        Thanks a lot for your kind words and support.

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                           Khanmaria12posted 18 months agoin reply to this

                           Welcome dear. Best of luck

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    Pari bilalposted 18 months ago

    https://hubpages.com/health/how-i-am-ma … 1-diabetes

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       theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

       Take the question mark from the title. It's not a question.
       
       Be careful how you word certain things like describing medication.
       
       I would prefer to read a more personal account especially as a parent. And you don't say how your daughter copes with the condition. There are loads of articles about Type 1 so make it more about your family. Add some emotion. People want to know how she is doing after her scary experience. Did she recover quickly?

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          Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

          I am using these medications for my daughter, which is why I mentioned them here. For safety concerns, I did not mention how many dosages should be given to any patient, as it is something that patients should discuss with their endocrinologist.
          I have been dealing with these two types of insulin for three years now, and I have done a lot of reading on them. Endocrinologists widely recommend them because they work similarly to the insulin produced by our pancreas when we eat. This is how we provide insulin to our diabetic kids when they eat, using these pens.
          We plan our meetings with her endocrinologist every 3 months.
          As far as the concern about how my girl is dealing with her condition,
          she definitely needs a lot of counseling for that.

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             theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

             I understand, but it's precisely because you are not a medical expert that you need to be careful. It's your perspective as a parent and your daughter's as a sufferer that can help other parents deal with a similar situation.
             
             What I'm trying to say (and probably not very well) is that your article should be less about the treatment and more about the day-to-day challenges, both physical and emotional. It will be more readable and more informative.
             
             Read some of the articles on the network site: https://patientslounge.com
             
             That's where you want your article to be.

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                Pari bilalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

                Understood! I am going to unpublish it and will publish it again with necessary changings.

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    Pari bilalposted 18 months ago

    As it is a step by step process about learning diabetes, it’s medication, dealing with my daughter’s questions. and even I was in trauma for so many days that I my self needed a psychiatrist.
    I will try my best to cover everything step by step.
    Thanks a lot for reading & I look for your suggestions.

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    Pari bilalposted 18 months ago

    https://discover.hubpages.com/family/th … h-diabetes

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