Seasons of Me, a poem by Janis Evans.

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   Jodahposted 21 months ago

   Please read this excellent poem by Janis in response to the word prompt “seasons.”
   https://hubpages.com/literature/Seasons-of-Me-Poem
   
   This was a wonderful response to the prompt, Jan. I love how you used the seasons to describe the various human emotions, great job. Your poetry is always a pleasure to read.

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for reading, John. I'm so happy you enjoyed this one and found it to be a pleasure to read. I was fun to write. It took longer to find the quotes, images and video than it did to write the poem. But that is usually the case. Thanks for posting the link.

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   MsDoraposted 21 months ago

   Jan's poem is quite a beautiful composite creation of human feelings. Surely, we manage to represent every season in our different moods. Thanks for an interesting read. Thank you, John, for sharing.

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Hi MsDora, so good to see you and connect! Thank you for reading my poem, glad you found it interesting and beautiful. It's a little out there. I love pushing the envelope with Brenda's word prompts.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 21 months ago

   Janis..
   In your work, "Seasons of Me Poem" you've created a great piece.
   
   In "Season's Humanity
   
   "Seasons of Me" the last part says it all..
   
   I am all seasons
   Driven by rain, wind and air
   Turning me on Earth's axis
   Seasons of me
   
   This is an awesome write!
   
   You have truly reached down into the depths and created a masterpiece of your thoughts.
   
   I love the quotes you used too.
   
   I'll post a link in the word prompt article

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Oh, thank you, Brenda! Your critique made me smile. I appreciate you very much.

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   Pamela99posted 21 months ago

   I think you have written an excellent poem, Janis, as it overs the home emotions related to the seasons of life. You have written a good response to Brenda's prompt, and the poem was a joy to read.
   
   Thanks you John for posting Janis's poem.

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you kindly, Pamela. So glad you liked it.

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 21 months ago

   Hi Janis!
   An excellent response to the word prompt, seasons.
   Yes, I agree that our behaviour, moods and emotions can be compared with different seasons. I found your thoughts interesting, and well expressed. A refreshing read.
   Thank you for sharing this.
   Thank you John. Happy weekend to both of you.

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you much, Chitrangada. Glad you enjoyed it. I wish you a great weekend, too. Thanks for reading.

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   Carb Divaposted 21 months ago

   Janis, you've created an excellent response to Brenda's prompt. I love how you compared our emotions to the fire and ice and winds of the seasons. Well done!

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much, Carb Diva. I appreciate your comment, thanks for reading.

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   AliciaCposted 21 months ago

   Janis has indeed created an excellent response to the challenge! She has created impressive and thought-provoking imagery in her poem. It’s the kind of poem that I like to read and enjoy multiple times.

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Wow, thanks, Alicia. What a wonderful comment. Continue to enjoy it, again and again.

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   ravirajan01posted 21 months ago

   Wonderful Janis. I like the interplay of human emotions and seasons here; the powerful imagery makes me visualize the seasons and the swirl of thoughts behind them. Thanks for sharing this great response to Brenda's prompt.
   
   Thanks, John, for sharing.

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Ravi. I’m grateful for your comment, glad you liked it.

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   surovi99posted 21 months ago

   I loved your poetry based on Brenda's prompt, "Seasons." I like the way you related the personality of humans to the different seasons. I enjoyed the adeptness in your well-written craft. Thank you for such a magnificent contribution, Janis.
   
   Thanks, John, for sharing her work.

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      jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for that very generous critique, Rosina. I'm so pleased. Glad you loved it.

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    Misbah786posted 21 months ago

    Wow! Janis, I loved your response to Brenda's word prompt. You have painted a perfect picture in this poem, and I love how you related seasons with emotions. Awesome!
    
    I especially liked these lines" Buckets of heavy rain, Pour from... the waters of change."
    The sunflower image is so soothing and beautiful. Nice choice! It added a sense of warmth. I loved it all! Thank you for sharing!
    PS: Are you interested in joining our pub on Medium? I was wondering if you are active on Medium. We'd love to have you on board.
    Much Love!
    
    Thank you for sharing, John
    
    Blessings always!

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       jansharesposted 21 months agoin reply to this

       Hi Misbah, glad you enjoyed this poem and the sunflower image. By now we have connected about your ask on Medium. Thanks for encouraging me to join the group! I hope I live up to the expectations as I am not as active as I should be. Hopefully, the group inspiration will help.

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          Misbah786posted 21 months agoin reply to this

          You are more than welcome, my dear friend. We are glad to have you on board!
          Much Love and Light! ❤️

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