I'd like feedback on my article: Homoeo Cure

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   ARUN KANTIposted 2 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Homoeo Cure

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      Gregory DeVictorposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Just like I have told you before, you must break your long paragraphs into much smaller ones. Readers on the Internet generally have short attention spans, and might not be willing to read a long paragraph.
      
      The shorter, the better.
      
      Also, make sure that there is a space between your paragraphs.

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      Kenna McHughposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi! The article still needs work. Proofread it and fix the problems. There are also fundamental formatting issues that you need to learn from the Learning Center. Here is the link: http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents
      
      Work hard, good luck.

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      Miebakagh57posted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Arum, seems you've been doing what our other fellow writers have suggested to you?                                    Congratulations!                                    I saw few short quatations (3 in all) that are in American-English quatation marks. And the comma or fullstop within, like "X Aodatum." HubPages frown at placing the quotation marks within, the quotes like  "X Aodatum".                                      Notice that the fullstop/period is outside. Get all these at the Learning Centre. And thanks.

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   Venkatachari Mposted 2 months ago

   The article lacks quality. There is no professional advice in it. It looks like sharing some happenings from your life, Arun. The article needs to be supported by professional homeopathy factual pieces of evidence.

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   theraggededgeposted 2 months ago

   I've never heard homeopathy called 'homeo' or 'homoeo' before.
   
   Surely the first is the root of many Greek words and the second is a mistake?

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   ARUN KANTIposted 2 months ago

   Thank you. It is now featured.

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      Gregory DeVictorposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      That is fine, but I hope that you take all of the suggestions that we have given to you seriously.

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         Kenna McHughposted 2 months agoin reply to this

         Gregory has a strong point. Your article will not last unless it's professionally written and follows HP guidelines.

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            Gregory DeVictorposted 2 months agoin reply to this

            Thanks Kenna!

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               Kenna McHughposted 2 months agoin reply to this

               You're welcome!

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   ARUN KANTIposted 2 months ago

   I shall definitely take your apt suggestions. Thank you

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