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Game: Change One Thing About This Sentence

  1. Alexander Pease profile image60
    Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

    In this game, you must change ONE word from the previous sentence. The change must be appropriate to hubpages guidelines, and must make sense. Also, you can not post directly after yourself, you must wait until someone else posts to change a word.

    I will start with this:

    "Jack and Jill were lost on the hill and couldn't find their way."

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      Brenda Durhamposted 6 years ago

      Joe and Jill were lost on the hill and couldn't find their way.

    2. BlissfulWriter profile image83
      BlissfulWriterposted 6 years ago

      Joe and Jill were lost on the mountain and couldn't find their way.

    3. Rosie2010 profile image75
      Rosie2010posted 6 years ago

      Joe and Jill were lost on the highway and couldn't find their way.

    4. jagandelight profile image87
      jagandelightposted 6 years ago

      Joe and Jill were lost at sea and couldn't find their way.

    5. Alexander Pease profile image60
      Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

      Joe and Jill were lost at sea and couldn't find their cat.

      (Hey, that makes sense, right?)

    6. Rosie2010 profile image75
      Rosie2010posted 6 years ago

      Joe and Jill were sailing at sea and couldn't find their cat.

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      MJoyceposted 6 years ago

      Joe and Jill were fishing at sea and couldn't find their way.

      1. Alexander Pease profile image60
        Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Joe plus Jill were sailing at sea and couldn't find their cat.

        1. Rosie2010 profile image75
          Rosie2010posted 6 years ago in reply to this

          Jack plus Jill were sailing at sea and couldn't find their cat.

    8. Eaglekiwi profile image70
      Eaglekiwiposted 6 years ago

      Jack plus Steve were sailing at sea and couldn't find their cat.

      1. Rosie2010 profile image75
        Rosie2010posted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Jack plus Steve were sailing at sea and couldn't find their dinner.

    9. Alexander Pease profile image60
      Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

      Jack plus Steve were sailing at sea and can't find their dinner.

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      Brenda Durhamposted 6 years ago

      Jack plus cat were sailing at sea and couldn't find their dinner.

    11. timorous profile image93
      timorousposted 6 years ago

      Jack plus cat were sailing at sea and couldn't find their compass.

    12. Eaglekiwi profile image70
      Eaglekiwiposted 6 years ago

      Jack plus cat were sailing at sea and couldn't find their map

      1. Alexander Pease profile image60
        Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Okay... there have been some mix ups along the way but I will try:

        Jack plus cat went sailing at sea and couldn't find their map.

        Remember, you must only change one thing about the last sentence, AND you must use the last sentence posted so, make sure the page is refreshed.

        But, great job so far!

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          Brenda Durhamposted 6 years ago in reply to this

          Oops!  I'm sorry;  I think it was me who changed two words.  I didn't mean to change "can't" into "couldn't".  Sorry...

    13. Eaglekiwi profile image70
      Eaglekiwiposted 6 years ago

      Jack plus cat went sailing at sea and couldn't find their cheese

    14. Rosie2010 profile image75
      Rosie2010posted 6 years ago

      Jack plus cat went sailing at sea and couldn't eat their cheese

    15. dml42 profile image58
      dml42posted 6 years ago

      Jack plus cat went sailing at sea and couldn't cut their cheese

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      lynnechandlerposted 6 years ago

      Jack plus cat went sailing at sea and couldn't catch their cheese.

    17. Eaglekiwi profile image70
      Eaglekiwiposted 6 years ago

      Mouse, plus cat went sailing at sea and couldn't cut their cheese

    18. Rosie2010 profile image75
      Rosie2010posted 6 years ago

      Mouse plus cat gone sailing at sea and couldn't cut their cheese

      1. tsmog profile image84
        tsmogposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Mouse plus cat gone sailing at sea and couldn't mustard their cheese

        1. CMHypno profile image88
          CMHypnoposted 6 years ago in reply to this

          Mouse plus cat gone kayaking at sea and couldn't mustard their cheese

          1. Rosie2010 profile image75
            Rosie2010posted 6 years ago in reply to this

            Dog plus cat gone kayaking at sea and couldn't mustard their cheese

    19. thirdmillenium profile image61
      thirdmilleniumposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went sailing at sea but could not end their fight

    20. Rosie2010 profile image75
      Rosie2010posted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went sailing at sea but could not continue their fight

    21. dingdondingdon profile image60
      dingdondingdonposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went whaling at sea but could not end their fight.

    22. 2uesday profile image84
      2uesdayposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went fishing at sea but could not end their fight.

    23. Eaglekiwi profile image70
      Eaglekiwiposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went fishing at seaworld but could not end their fight.

    24. Alexander Pease profile image60
      Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went boating at seaworld but could not end their fight.

    25. tsmog profile image84
      tsmogposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went boating at seaworld but could not end their plight

    26. 2uesday profile image84
      2uesdayposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went boating at seaworld but could not hide their plight.

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      Brenda Durhamposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went boating at seaworld but could not hide their vertigo.

    28. 2uesday profile image84
      2uesdayposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went surfing at seaworld but could not hide their vertigo.

    29. Alexander Pease profile image60
      Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went surfing at Hawaii but could not hide their vertigo.

    30. Eaglekiwi profile image70
      Eaglekiwiposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat went surfing at Hawaii but could not hide their lei.

    31. Alexander Pease profile image60
      Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat are surfing at Hawaii but could not hide their lei.

    32. timorous profile image93
      timorousposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus cat are surfing at Hawaii but could not hide their enthusiasm.

    33. Alexander Pease profile image60
      Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus God are surfing at Hawaii but could not hide their enthusiasm.

    34. timorous profile image93
      timorousposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus God are pontificating at Hawaii but could not hide their enthusiasm.

    35. Alexander Pease profile image60
      Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus God are pontificating in Hawaii but could not hide their enthusiasm.

    36. Rosie2010 profile image75
      Rosie2010posted 6 years ago

      Dog plus God are celebrating in Hawaii but could not hide their enthusiasm.

    37. Alexander Pease profile image60
      Alexander Peaseposted 6 years ago

      Dog plus God are celebrating in Heaven but could not hide their enthusiasm.

    38. Rosie2010 profile image75
      Rosie2010posted 6 years ago

      Dog plus man are celebrating in Heaven but could not hide their enthusiasm.

     
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