I'd like feedback on my Hub: Top 6 Most Famous Super-Rich People For Forex Busi

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   soesiloposted 9 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Top 6  Most Famous Super-Rich People For Forex Business and Futures Product in History (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      sallybeaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Try writing your hubs in a program such as Word and do a  spell and grammar check before publishing your hubs..  I understand that English may not be your first language but there are far too many basic errors in your writing.

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         soesiloposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         thanks for your help. nice to see u

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   SmartAndFunposted 9 years ago

   PAGING TIMETRAVELER2. PAGING TIMETRAVELER2. YOUR ASSISTANCE IS REQUIRED.

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      soesiloposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      i am novice in hub. so i do not understand what is  PAGING TIMETRAVELER2 please specify that to make me understand tahnks

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         SmartAndFunposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         I'm sorry, soesilo. I was making a joke, and it wasn't even a funny one. It had nothing to do with you or your article. That was not fair to you.
         
         I took a quick glance at your article, and I while it is very thorough and full of information, I think the problem most certainly is it is written in broken English.
         
         English fluency is required here at HubPages. Do you have a friend or relative who could read over your work and help you fix the English usage problems?

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            soesiloposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            Thanks SmartAndFun, now i understand. my problem here is about english usage. i will fix it soon. thanks  SmartAndFun for your feed to me. very helpful

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      calculus-geometryposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

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         SmartAndFunposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         You always make me laugh, C-G. Glad to return the favor.

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   Suzanne Dayposted 9 years ago

   Sed-me might be able to help...

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      soesiloposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      do you mean send ?

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         Suzanne Dayposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         No, there's a hubber called Sed-me who may be able to help you.

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            sallybeaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            

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            soesiloposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            thanks Suzanne Day nice to see u

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   calculus-geometryposted 9 years ago

   Hi soesilo,
   
   I skimmed your hub and it's well-organized with a lot of good information, but you have many small errors in English usage throughout. Do you have MS Word or a spelling and grammer checking program? I think if you run it through two different grammar checkers you can fix about half of the mistakes.  To polish it more, have a friend who speaks English read it out loud to catch the more subtle usage errors. 
   
   http://www.grammarly.com/

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      soesiloposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      thank you very much. I will follow your advice I will fix it as soon as possible.  my english very bad because i am Indonesian nice to see u all

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