I'd like feedback on my article: What Benefits Could You Get from Writing?

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   manunulatposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What Benefits Could You Get from Writing?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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   Carb Divaposted 6 years ago

   I love the message that you are conveying here. However, there are some sentences that need a little improvement. Your English is quite good, but it is still obvious that English is not your first language. May I suggest Grammarly.com. It is a free program that will analyze your writing as you type, making suggestions for grammar and punctuation as you go. Good luck to you and welcome to Hub Pages. We are here because we enjoy writing and sharing with one another.

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      manunulatposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      thanks...your suggestions will help me a lot..will look for grammarly.co..thanks again..

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      Mohamad Qutaitposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      please, can you give any feedback for my research

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         Jeremy Gillposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         I'm not sure whether you're addressing me or Carb, but your profile indicates you don't have any hubs for us to review.

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            Mohamad Qutaitposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            https://hubpages.com/business/Analysis- … -situation
            
            this is my article, please

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               Jeremy Gillposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               Hmm, the link gave a "page does not exist message".

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                  Mohamad Qutaitposted 6 years agoin reply to this

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                     Jeremy Gillposted 6 years agoin reply to this

                     Yikes, please don't post your whole hub. Here's a link to the forum discussing the article:
                     
                     https://hubpages.com/community/forum/33 … ost3990647

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                        Mohamad Qutaitposted 6 years agoin reply to this

                        Thank you so Much, Mr.Jeremy

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   Jeremy Gillposted 6 years ago

   First things first, this article needs to be proofread. We've got many errors (spelling constraints as constraits) and even more awkwardly-worded phrases.
   
   Examples:
   What hinders you to write?
   It was in high school, I started to feel the urge to writ
   I just wanted to compose and come up with a write-up that would gratify such desire
   All these has common goal
   
   For some reason, us authors are hesitant to proofread what we've written (perhaps we fear such mistakes), but it truly is essential to forming a well-constructed piece. Other tips I have include being consistent with capsule title capitalization and using less of the passive voice. Best of luck.

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      manunulatposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      thanks..very helpful...

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   manunulatposted 6 years ago

   I have done the suggestions already but still i got the same message... there might be spammy elements... I am not sure if the italicization of phrase or using bullets or having two poll capsules have  something to do with this.
   
   Please help me out...

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      manunulatposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      As of now, I tried to change the italicized to regular font font and also changed bullets to numbers and using the preset format just using regular text and I also removed the 2nd poll capsule. I hope this would make a difference. I am waiting as of the moment for the feedback.
      
      Keeping my fingers crossed.
      
      Thanks

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      Sherry Hewinsposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Usually spammy elements means links or Amazon capsules

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