I'd like feedback on my article: Cancer Alternative Ayurveda Treatments...

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   Ajit jadhavposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Cancer Alternative Ayurveda Treatments Solutions for You (must be signed in to view)

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      Ajit jadhavposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Ok sir, Please tell me how the article improve

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   Two points immediately struck me as major problems. You start the article by saying that cancer is a "popular" condition. The word popular means liked or enjoyed, which definitely doesn't apply to cancer. Secondly, you say that "it has been proven that herbs are effective in curing for cancer completely". Where is the evidence for this claim? What type of cancer are you referring to? You also say "it is recommended to treat cancer alternately using herbs for the cancer treatment". Who is doing the recommending? Where are your authoritative references?
   
   I think that researchers should investigate all possible treatments for cancer, including herbal ones. Articles like yours must be written very carefully because of the potential danger of the disease, however. Even the wording of the article's title is problematic because you are telling people that an Ayurveda treatment is a "solution" for cancer.

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      Ajit jadhavposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for reading my article and your valuable feedback. i remove that all suspect points

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   Rupert Taylorposted 4 years ago

   In addition to what Alicia says, your command of the English language is just not good enough for HubPages.
   
   You cannot make the curative claims you do without reference to peer-reviewed and published studies.
   
   Are you a medical doctor, or is your doctorate in some other discipline? If you have specialized knowledge of cancer treatment you should say so in your biography.

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      Ajit jadhavposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for giving me your valuable feedback. i edit it.

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   erorantesposted 4 years ago

   Hello mister Amit. I found a mistake in your article. On the paragraph where you talk about the herbs. You need to edit . The best cancer are garlic and red clover. I think you meant the best herbs are garlic. I like your article. It is informative, useful and gives hope to some people who are near to get cancer. The pictures of the herbs are a little foggy. Perhaps, you can write on the paragraph the name of the herbs. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. I am great full.

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      Ajit jadhavposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for giving your valuable feedback.

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   Ajit jadhavposted 4 years ago

   Thanks for giving your valuable feedback. thank you mam.

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   Ajit jadhavposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I edit the article as per your guideline but still it unpublish.
   Please check and suggest me.
   
   Thank you.

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   Natasha Tungareposted 4 years ago

   Hello sir, I really liked the way you have elaborated the article. Cancer treatment is something people are trying to find a solution about. I would like to suggest you that put up home remedies and lifestyle changes which someone needs for cancer. Also hubpages usually prefers original images taken by you and not from any other source. Having a poll, callout sections makes the article more engaging and attractive.
   Thank you

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      Ajit jadhavposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Ok Mam, thank you for your valuable feedback

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   Ajit jadhavposted 4 years ago

   Hi sir and mam,
   i update the article but still its not publish.
   
   Please help me to publish.

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      AliciaCposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      You should correct the English errors in the article, as Rupert says. I think it’s also very important to include authoritative references for the information that you share.
      
      I just looked at a health website created by the Government of British Columbia, where I live. The website say that some aspects of Ayurveda can be beneficial, but contrary to your statement that herbs are free from side effects, it says that “Ayurvedic herbal medicines, like conventional medicines, may cause side effects, trigger allergic reactions, or interact with other medicines or herbs you are taking”. Since you seem to disagree with this, you must support your claim.
      
      Your other claims about alternative treatments for cancer must be supported by references as well. These include the ideas that grapes can cure cancer and that ginger kills ovarian cancer cells. All of the references that I’ve found say that ginger has been found to kill isolated ovarian cancer cells in the lab. This is a very different situation from killing cancer cells in the human body. If you know of some relevant research that I’ve missed, make sure that you refer to it.
      
      In addition to adding references, you need to make your qualifications clearer. On your profile, you refer to yourself as Dr. Ajit. On the bio for this article, you refer to yourself as Mr. Ajit.

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   Ajit jadhavposted 4 years ago

   Thanks for your feedback.
   I am Mr. Ajit and i write articles for dr. Amol bamane. So at bio by mistakly it come dr. Also i mention the reference and update the article.
   Thank you.

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