Anyone want to try and write a group poem - a line each....

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   manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

   Since it had been two weeks since he had changed his "Tarzan-type"  underwear

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   Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

   he covered his nose and went for the chase

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   Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

   not realizing he had blood all over his face

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   words cocktailposted 14 years ago

   don't forget we ought to trace..
   where's the lion and where's the prey?
   the poem seems to bring a story,
   red, black, white and gray...

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   caravalhophotoposted 14 years ago

   The lion, nose plugged from the stench, pounces on Grandpa with pride and glory

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   Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

   could this perhaps be the end of the story?

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   LEWJposted 14 years ago

   I hope so---it's gotten quite gory

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   Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

   I'll miss not being able to read what you said before me

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   manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

   Although some folks...I don't understand...entirely

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    it's pretty confusing  at times I confess

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Secretly, this is my code name...I write these lines encoded...under great duress

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    for you are the greatest manly poet - you need not stress

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Very nice of you...but this ain't about me...'cause I'm a mess!

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    let's get back to the tale of the man in distress

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    He is a secret agent man...As great as James Bond...no less

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    He looks to me more like a modern day Robin Hood

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    dyonderposted 14 years ago

    a force reckoned by some ill, by others good

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    shook the earth and stripped the trees of their wood

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    so birds in the trees had to leave the neighbourhood

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    and then quiet.........you could hear the drop of a pin

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    Startled, he reached for his small bottle of Gin

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    it wasn't there .....where had it gone?

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    "Doh!" He remembered - He gave it to his friend John

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    ediggityposted 14 years ago

    He was a smoked out Rastafarian who said, "Hey mon."

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    that's probably why when the earth trembled and shook

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    he carried on walking, giving the animals a nervous look

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    not realizing the severity of what had happened

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    a Lion smiled at him, its teeth well sharpened

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    LEWJposted 14 years ago

    And then to his left in the trees up ahead...

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    two birds stared at him and the Lion in Dread

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    not knowing who to fear more the man or the beast

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    they took off .....heading east

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    2uesdayposted 14 years ago

    as they had no wish to be the breakfast feast

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    and besides their feather were all rumpled and creased

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    Alivetusposted 14 years ago

    And straight to the frying pan I roast

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    Decisions, decisions - "shall I have them with toast?"

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    but grilled with beans I like them the most

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    2uesdayposted 14 years ago

    chance lost, they fly off to the coast

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    only to find someone beat them to the post

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    It was the "Phantom Poet" who made remarks...he loves to boast!

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    2uesdayposted 14 years ago

    He lives in a tumble down castle with a ghost.

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    PeeGeeposted 14 years ago

    And a strange apparition which he loved the most

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       And you should put this poem in a hub to boast !

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    dyonderposted 14 years ago

    first on the lips, then in devotion

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    my heart is in motion

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Hold steady to the course...though your thoughts are as wide as the ocean

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    it's pretty difficult with so much confusing emotion

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    I will prepare you a concoction

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    that should get your bowels in motion

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    2uesdayposted 14 years ago

    I think you should forget the offer of such a potion.

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    Better rub your body with a musky lotion

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