From within she shall escape Gnaw through flesh and bone if necessary She shall return I know For she never legitimately departed Although there was deceit in her hiding Lying in wait was not her scheme Rather a demand from one Indecisive by nature With bated breath She patiently observed Watching from the inside all of the unfoldings Without making herself known She has sifted through the strings of chaos Delicately relacing it back into order The way that logic demands Even now I sense her efforts The building of an inferno That shall cleanse away injustices committed For those who have long awaited Her ultimate return Stand back I say For with her homecoming Also comes great fury From within she shall escape Gnaw through flesh and bone if necessary
Your observation of being a little unhinged is dead accurate. That is how it was meant to come across. All human beings find themselves a little out of whack during certain moments in their history. My moment came two years ago and when it did I buried who I was and became someone I am not. It's about the anger that builds when a person pretends.
As far as attention seeking. . . Poetry is meant to be shared with the world, it may relate to what someone else is going through. It may strike a chord. You may find kinship with another.
Your pentagram profile picture with the goat in the middle speaks volumes of you. I have been there before my friend. Thank you for your feedback on this I do appreciate all criticism, even and especially the negative. Take care.
Thank you for commenting and your defense of what is written. Much appreciated and much love. I am absolutely always open to constructive feedback. Send me anything you'd like to, I am sure it will help me in the future. Take care.
Hey there little froggy friend. Ha,ha I'll always be a little unhinged. I am human! I love your comment here and your poem is darling. I have a great big smile on my face this morning all because of you!