The Proposal ~ A Short Fiction Story By John

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   surovi99posted 2 years ago

   Here is an interesting short fiction by John. Please read it. Here is the link:
   https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … tion-Story
   
   Hi John,
   Your short story is so astounding full of mysteries and puzzles. I wait in anticipation of the story in continuation. Thank you for giving us so much entertainment in this lovely afternoon. I appreciate it so much!

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Rosina. I am happy that you enjoyed this story and the mystery presented. I hope the second part can also hold your interest. Your comment is much appreciated.

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      Gyanendra Mocktanposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      The story is filled with suspnce!! I am eagerly waiting for what's going happen!!

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   ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

   Wonderful John. The suspense is nail-biting.Is Michael getting dragged into a fraudulent scam, or is there something else related to Michael's past?Interesting John
   
   Thanks, Rosina, for sharing.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Ravi. I haven’d decided 100% where the story is going yet..weighing up a couple of options like you queried. I am glad you are finding it suspenseful.

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   Misbah786posted 2 years ago

   I enjoyed the suspense in your story, John, and am looking forward to the next part. I liked how Michael's first thought with his money was to buy a wheelchair for his wife and take her out for a dinner.. It shows his love and care for his wife. But who knows what will happen next? I didn't want to stop reading it at this point... it was very very intriguing.
   
   By the way, nice profile pic. My friend looks super cool.
   
   Thanks, Rosina, for sharing John's excellent story. 
   
   Sending bundles of blessings

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hey Misbah. I like to think that Michael is a nice guy who has just found himself in a difficult situation that is none of his own doing. But, who knows what will be revealed in the rest of the story. Sorry to end it prematurely, but I am glad it made you want to find out what is to come.
      Thank you for the kind words about my new profile pic. Blessings back.

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   I hope you will write the rest of the story, John. I sure want to know what they are paying Michael to do. I did like the way he seems to love his wife, and he seems like a good man, but what is next?

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   Hi Pamela. Yes, Michael seems like an innocent victim of some scam or not-so-innocent plan. I will certainly post more soon.

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   Carb Divaposted 2 years ago

   John, you are such a tease! Do you have a plan for where this is headed, or are you making this up as you go along LOL?

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Linda, you seem to know me too well. In fact I just started writing in response to the prompt without a whole story line mapped out. I haven’t written the ending yet, and it’s going to be a surprise for even me. I have a few scenarios buzzing around in my head…just have to settle on one.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Awe John....
   You got me again.
   
   Just as I'm intently waiting to see what's in the video...you leave me stranded.
   
   Great write.   Definitely suspenseful and it seems so real.
   Just like something that could happen to anyone.
   
   Can't wait to read more.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Sorry Brenda, I love leaving the reader in suspense. Must be the evil side of me i am glad it was suspenseful and seemed real though. I wanted the readers to be able to relate. I am working on more as we speak.

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   This is certainly an intriguing story! Michael seems so nice, and his desire to help his wife is lovely. In real life, sometimes bad things happen to good people, though. I’m looking forward to the next instalment of John’s story very much.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Linda. Yes, bad things can happen to good people. Let's hope the remainder of the story doesn't disappoint.

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

   Hello John!
   Just like others,  I have enjoyed reading your story, inspired by a prompt! You have created enough curiosity to read it further, when you write the next part!
   Thank you for sharing and thanks to Rosina too!

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Chitrangada. I am glad you enjoyed the story, and that it left you curious about the ending. Hopefully, I won't keep you waiting long.

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    Jodahposted 2 years ago

    Gyanendra, I am glad your found this suspenseful and are looking forward to the next chapter.

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       Gyanendra Mocktanposted 2 years agoin reply to this

       Yes indeed. Since the first of August , I've been going through unexpeted events around me. Will I be able able to convert them into short story? I have this question banging in head. Thank you.

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