A Sequel to the “New Writing Career” Fiction

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   Rosina has written an excellenr sequel ro  "Ready to Embark on a New Writing Career: A Short Fiction.”
   
   https://hubpages.com/literature/A-Seque … er-Fiction

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   I enjoyed reading the sequel to your first story. I thought it was very good. I like the way there were instructions, then the story while Adnan searches and seeks to solve the mystery surrounding Nadia's abrupt departure from the university in Virginia. I think this is a good sequel Rosina, and I found it caught my attention immediately.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Pamela, for sharing the link to my story. I loved knowing what you liked about my sequel. I also love the fact it caught your attention immediately. Gratitude for your kind and encouraging comments.

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   ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

   Interesting sequel Rosina.I refreshed myself with the 1st part a bit and it is intriguing how the story has gone so far. I think Adnan would be the fundamental pillar of the theme. Thanks for sharing.
   
   Thanks, Pamela, for sharing Rosina's story.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am glad, Ravi, you like the sequel. I am also happy you refreshed yourself with the 1st part a bit. Yes, I agree that Adnan is now the fundamental pillar of the theme. I appreciate your comments. Thank you so much.

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   A very good continuation of the story, Rosina. What a unique ideas well. Thank you for using my one sentence challenge as the prompt.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am so happy you liked the continuation of the story, John. I am also so glad you think the idea is unique. You are most welcome. I was only happy to use your one sentence challenge as the prompt. Thank you so much for your generous comments.

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   Your story is interesting, Rosina. I love the "Stay in touch" at the end of Nadia's letter. That makes me think that there may be some type of relationship between Adnan and Nadia in the future.
   
   Thanks for sharing the article, Pamela.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am happy to know you found the story interesting. I didn't think much when I put in "Stay in touch" at the end of Nadia's letter, but now it appears to me yes, you could be right. But for now I want to put an end right there. I may continue with the story from the perspective you showed me some time later.  Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Linda.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Rosina,
   You have once again impressed me.
   
   I wonder why he didn't get the note translated in the beginning instead of waiting for years to pass...but then again, that makes this story more intriguing.
   
   The fact that he traveled to figure out where she ended up speaks volumes.
   
   I agree that her response to keep in touch is an opening line for the next sequel.
   
   It seems you are on a roll...
   
   Your words definitely have the ability to be published. 
   
   Imagine...a complete novel by the time you are finished.
   
   Great job.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I love it when you say I have impressed you again. She wasn't a very close friend and so, he just didn't bother until years later when the note aroused his curiosity. Yes, I guess that would be an opening line for the next sequel. But I just don't want to write it right away but maybe later. Thank you so much for having confidence in me to write a complete novel. I love your wonderful comments. They encourage me a lot, Brenda.

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Rosina...
         No need to write another right away.
         Let it simmer...
         Sometimes the best words come after a long wait.
         Just know that you are on the right track & your words are terrific.
         They keep us inspired..
         Congratulations!

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            surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

            I agree with you, Brenda. I will wait until my muse says it is ready to continue with this story. Thank you so much for the congratulations. I have always wanted to write terrific, and I guess I am near about that point. That makes me feel so happy!

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

   Hello Rosina,
   A wonderful sequel to your earlier story and as always, you have kept the readers engaged, till the end, rather asking for more!
   I liked the outlines-- Generally, It’s easier to develop the story, according to the outlines!
   Thank you for the interesting read!
   Thanks Pamela for sharing the link!

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am delighted that you liked the sequel, Chitrangada. Yes, the readers are asking for more to the story. I am glad to have kept them engaged till the end. Yes, outlines always help to develop a story, and I am happy you liked them. Thank you so much for your delightful and generous comments.

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   Peggy Wposted 2 years ago

   Rosina,
   You are weaving together a good story, and as others have already written, it deserves more.  Will there be a budding romance?  Will that assistant professor be ultimately punished for misdeeds with students? 
   Thanks Pamela for showcasing Rosina's story.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You raised good points, Peggy. I feel inspired to write more but not immediately. Thanks for the ideas. I will keep them in mind. When my muse takes over in time, I will write. I appreciate your comments a lot.

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   Ankita Bposted 2 years ago

   The sequel was as engaging as the first part and I really enjoyed it. It's interesting how the story ends; it will keep one wanting to know more what happens next. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story, Rosina.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am pleased you like this piece and enjoyed reading it. I will try to continue with the story some time later. I am glad you find the ending interesting and that it kept you engaged. Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I truly appreciate them, Ankita.

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