Another Creative Poem has Arrived on Luck!! Take a Peek.

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   tsmogposted 20 months ago

   From Janis arrives a creative work about Luck with a little bit of twist. It offers more than a moment or two of introspection. I encourage a peek at her work. Share your thoughts if comfortable.
   
   Luck or Faith - A Poem
   https://hubpages.com/literature/luck-or-faith-a-poem

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      tsmogposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      The title alone causes my mind to spin, Janis. Maybe it is an elevated mood, yet I gave a few moments on that before venturing to the poem itself feeding my inquiring mind to seek a truth for 'self'. Thanks!
      
      Your poem is beautiful. I read it twice to be able to have my thoughts gathered together for this post. I like how there was shall we say conflict, compromise, and revelation too. Perspective may be found with the intro as I see it.
      
      Sharing, I did find my truth too! It is to venture onto the web seeking biblical knowledge on both 'Luck and Faith' to help guide my decision to the question proposed.
      
      Thanks!

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         jansharesposted 20 months agoin reply to this

         I really appreciated your critique, Tim. Glad you liked the poem. Hope the intro gave context and perspective. Good to know it prompted you to explore the subject more. I'm sure there must be tons written on the argument of faith versus luck. I tried to leave it open enough for all to explore yet hold true to my own beliefs. Thanks again for your enthusiasm.

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks for sharing this one Tim.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 20 months ago

   Hey lady...
   I'll get back with you when I can.  Im getting ready to go away for a short while.
   
   Now...take a break and enjoy the rest of your day.

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      jansharesposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks, Brenda. I did. Hubby and I went to a concert, had a great time. This was a productive Saturday.

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 20 months agoin reply to this

         That sounds great!  So glad the two of you had this time together.
         
         It was a Win! Win!

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   Jodahposted 20 months ago

   What a wonderful and thought-provoking poem and commentary, Janis.the song is beautiful as well. Without faith, I don’t think we can have “good luck.” I would much rather hand over my destiny to God and his grace, then to rely on pure luck though. Thank you for sharing the link, Tim.

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      jansharesposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you, John. So glad you liked it. I agree with you. Luck alone is not enough. Thanks for reading.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 20 months ago

   Janis...
   I absolutely love your article and your poem.
   
   Luck or Faith ~
   I do think that in the end, God is in charge. He knows what direction our life is supposed to go.
   
   I think Lady Luck has a lot to do with God's blessings and our prayers, but your poem asks the question, is the universe the same as faith?
   
   I know I've always been taught to make a wish on  shooting stars and other superstitions, yet I believe totally in the power of prayer.
   
   Oh... but we never cross fingers on both hands...that brings bad luck.
   
   So many of us do hope to hit that lottery or other easy cash... yet seldom does it happen.  Still, it must have a purpose...if nothing else, to keep us dreaming.
   
   P.S. ~ I'd never heard of that song before...it's good.
   
   Great write.  I posted a link in the word prompt article.

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      jansharesposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      Beautiful summary, Brenda. Thank you so much. I'm always happy to participate in your word challenges. This was an excellent choice. I'm so pleased you loved it. Thanks for posting the link. Take a listen to more of his songs. He's a genius.

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 20 months agoin reply to this

         Thanks Janis...
         I'll put him on my YouTube so I can listen to a few more.

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   Venkatachari Mposted 20 months ago

   A nice perception, Janis. I agree with you. I always love God and keep faith in Him. Whatever comes is, His Blessing and Grace.
   
   Thanks, Tim, for sharing this.

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      jansharesposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks for reading, Venkatachari. I'm glad you liked it and feel the same.

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 20 months ago

   Hello Janis,
   Wonderful response to the word prompt, Luck.
   I do agree with your words and views. Nothing happens without the will of God.
   Hard work, hope and faith are our tools to achieve what we wish for.
   Thank you for sharing the beautiful message through your well crafted poem.
   Thank you Tim for sharing Janis’s work.

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      jansharesposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Chitrangada,
      Happy you took the time to read it and liked the poem. Thank you for commenting.

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