To A Friend I Love

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  1. jeric macam profile image57
    jeric macamposted 8 years ago

    If I were asked to write a poem
    I rather write about a friend I've known.
    The one who always there for me
    Whom can I count on and lean on, tenderly.

    A friend who I trust so much
    Often cares for me and understand me a lot.
    When problems comes into my life
    Doesn't leave at my sight and always at my side.

    A person who I believe unto
    A friend who share solve with my shortcomings and problems, too.
    Through thick and thin
    We both care and share our dreams.

    If God allows me to make a wish
    I'll hope that we could live in peace.
    But when hindrances keep our dreams apart
    The kindness and the goodness we've sahred will never part.

    One thing I could give
    To a friend I still believe
    Is the friendship thta bind us together
    To God I pray, we'll still be forever and ever.

    1. alternate poet profile image67
      alternate poetposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      not as good as the last one in my opinion smile you should be putting these into hubs not on the forums really.

      Where are you from?

      1. jeric macam profile image57
        jeric macamposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Manila, Philippines

    2. Rossimobis profile image52
      Rossimobisposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Got here after posting something for my friend..Darling gone.
      jeric macam, you have got it flowing and like alternate poet advised...get this piece into hubs plz...

      great writing.

  2. profile image0
    karmaaposted 8 years ago

    Hello new too
    from India
    nice to meet you

  3. Sunny_S profile image60
    Sunny_Sposted 8 years ago

    Good stuff.

  4. Poetic Lyrist profile image60
    Poetic Lyristposted 8 years ago


  5. Daniel Carter profile image76
    Daniel Carterposted 8 years ago

    If you love writing poetry, it doesn't matter so much what other people think, as much as it matters that you keep writing it by the pound. Practice will produce your singular voice, and your voice will become clear and strong, the more you write.

    Your poem has nice elements to it. But your best work is yet to come, I believe.

    Yes, hub this. And keep writing.

    1. kathryn1000 profile image61
      kathryn1000posted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I think you just look at the scanning...somelones a bit long,but you have your own voice and something to say,so all you need is hours of practise!


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