If I were asked to write a poem
I rather write about a friend I've known.
The one who always there for me
Whom can I count on and lean on, tenderly.
A friend who I trust so much
Often cares for me and understand me a lot.
When problems comes into my life
Doesn't leave at my sight and always at my side.
A person who I believe unto
A friend who share solve with my shortcomings and problems, too.
Through thick and thin
We both care and share our dreams.
If God allows me to make a wish
I'll hope that we could live in peace.
But when hindrances keep our dreams apart
The kindness and the goodness we've sahred will never part.
One thing I could give
To a friend I still believe
Is the friendship thta bind us together
To God I pray, we'll still be forever and ever.
not as good as the last one in my opinion you should be putting these into hubs not on the forums really.
Where are you from?
Got here after posting something for my friend..Darling gone.
jeric macam, you have got it flowing and like alternate poet advised...get this piece into hubs plz...
If you love writing poetry, it doesn't matter so much what other people think, as much as it matters that you keep writing it by the pound. Practice will produce your singular voice, and your voice will become clear and strong, the more you write.
Your poem has nice elements to it. But your best work is yet to come, I believe.
Yes, hub this. And keep writing.
by Victoria Van Ness 5 years ago
How many hubs do you traditionally write in a week?I started out strong writing a handful every single week when I got started, but then had to consider other ways to make money. lol Now I feel successful if I can get 2-3 written a week. How about you? Am I really slacking?
by FelineFrance 7 years ago
I am honestly too scared of writing. I feel like my work would be boring to readers. Before, I begin writing anything, I can almost imagine all the criticism I will receive. Also, I am very scared of that, I prefer if I remained anonymous if my work were to be ever published.
by L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 14 months ago
Any one got any tips for when your writing your first novel?
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