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Shut up and write a poem part2

  1. schoolgirlforreal profile image71
    schoolgirlforrealposted 6 years ago

    Just because (only because) sometimes these threads get long, I'd like to start part 2, if that's ok smile

    My love for you
    Is stronger now
    Than it ever was
    Before

    You take me places
    I'd never go
    And now I feel
    Reassured

    I dream of you and I
    on a picnic not in July
    on a beach somewhere exotic
    Drinking pina colas
    Not tonic

    1. Ginger Meow profile image77
      Ginger Meowposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I tripped on my tongue,
      and fell upon your drink,
      I'll share your pina cola,
      and give you a cheeky wink.

      1. schoolgirlforreal profile image71
        schoolgirlforrealposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        wink lol lol

  2. Stevennix2001 profile image84
    Stevennix2001posted 6 years ago

    roses are red
    violets are blue
    sex is good
    why not ask for more?

    the end.  smile tongue

    1. Ginger Meow profile image77
      Ginger Meowposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      You want more?
      for her it's a chore,
      really a bore,
      she'll show you the door,
      if her needs, you ignore.

      1. Stevennix2001 profile image84
        Stevennix2001posted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Actually, when it comes to loving,
        I've been known to be attentive,  wink
        As my old father used to say to do something right,
        you have to take your sweet time,
        never leaving a lady needing,
        while leaving her craving for more. wink

    2. Ginger Meow profile image77
      Ginger Meowposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Rose are red,
      Violets are blue,
      you've got the honey,
      and I've got the glue! :>

      1. Stevennix2001 profile image84
        Stevennix2001posted 6 years agoin reply to this

        If i didn't know any better ginger, i say you were trying to seduce me, since you responded to my post twice already.  wink lol (joke)

        1. schoolgirlforreal profile image71
          schoolgirlforrealposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          is ginger a girl? couldn't tell lol!

          1. Ginger Meow profile image77
            Ginger Meowposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            All ginger cats are male (true fact) and all tortise shell cats are female (true fact as well).

        2. Ginger Meow profile image77
          Ginger Meowposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          I am not trying to seduce, only a bit of fun smile

  3. schoolgirlforreal profile image71
    schoolgirlforrealposted 6 years ago

    Sex in the morning
    Sex in the evening
    Mmmmm kissing all day

    Love your body
    Love your face
    Ohhhh you're so cute

    Be my one and only playmate
    Put your passion into me
    Wowww you're so great

    1. Ginger Meow profile image77
      Ginger Meowposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      All of a sudden I feel, um .....well you know...

      1. schoolgirlforreal profile image71
        schoolgirlforrealposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        lol

  4. reallygoodpoetry profile image50
    reallygoodpoetryposted 6 years ago

    i lov dog
    i lov frog
    i lov jog
    in the fog!
    sometime jog
    in fog
    with dog
    i hear frog
    sitting on log
    o no som smog!!!
    i choke
    trip on log!!!

    ow

    1. Ginger Meow profile image77
      Ginger Meowposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      So let me get this right:

      You jog,
      with dog,
      pass frog,
      on log,
      in fog,
      breath smog,
      kick log,
      scare frog,
      startle dog,
      blame smog.

  5. Ginger Meow profile image77
    Ginger Meowposted 6 years ago

    These new poems seem to have a common theme,
    It's of what a lot of men could only dream,
    "Really did that make you shudder and scream?"
    Someone's stretching the truth, so it seems.

    1. schoolgirlforreal profile image71
      schoolgirlforrealposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hmm

  6. Ben Evans profile image71
    Ben Evansposted 6 years ago

    Tick tock goes the clock
    click click click.
    The gears go around
    and make me sick.

    Face the time
    oh yes oh yes
    Silence is unnerving
    just making a mess.

    But with a pretty wristband
    look at the bling.
    Golden memories
    seem to sing.

    No sense anyway
    but gotta go
    No time now.
    Its running low.

    So sing me a song
    verse by verse
    My watch makes sentences
    very terse.

    1. schoolgirlforreal profile image71
      schoolgirlforrealposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I like this

      1. Ben Evans profile image71
        Ben Evansposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Thank you for the compliment.  I enjoy wordsmithing.

  7. Ginger Meow profile image77
    Ginger Meowposted 6 years ago

    Shut up! I'll smash you into pieces,
    your clicking and whirring,
    it's my memory it fleeces,
    you're too close to hold,
    pain is what it releases,
    I want to rip you out,
    until this feeling ceases.

    (About a watch reminding someone about a lost friend - Apologies Ben Evans, your poem inspired me to write this one)

    1. Ben Evans profile image71
      Ben Evansposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      It is all right.  My goodness I didn't see this thread until it was brought up again. 

      It is interesting what you are righting.

      Cheers

  8. schoolgirlforreal profile image71
    schoolgirlforrealposted 6 years ago

    Ugly kitty
    lying there with mouth ready to hiss
    Bring me back the kitty you were
    And stop being a bit**!!

    I'll give you a bath
    In really cold water
    You'll shudder and meow
    "What's the matter?"

    Oh kitty my kitty
    I have a new kitty
    And this one is nicer
    So go find Sean Ditty

    My kitty is nice
    and plays sorta sweet
    He's not the kind
    to attack your feet

    My friend's kitty
    is a vampire for sure
    Everytime I saw this kitty
    It bled me some more

    I stay away
    and I'm glad
    cause my real kitty
    is in my pad


    big_smile
    from ginger meow's kitty icon roll

    1. Ginger Meow profile image77
      Ginger Meowposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Good one schoolgirlforreal smile

  9. hoodieweather profile image59
    hoodieweatherposted 6 years ago

    Take a train
    Let's play games

    Find my house
    Cat and mouse

    Ring the bell
    Scratch then yell

    Floor or bed
    Stop until fed

    smile

    1. kathryn1000 profile image59
      kathryn1000posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Brilliant,everybody

  10. maven101 profile image75
    maven101posted 6 years ago

    Lets sail away, to Mandalay...
    Where the girls all love to swim...
    Where palm trees sway, and dolphins play...
    and poems like this begin...( and end )...Larry

  11. The Suburban Poet profile image80
    The Suburban Poetposted 6 years ago

    I forgive you
    There is no vengeance
    I forgive you
    I let you live
    I forgive you
    I didn't strike
    I forgive you
    You hurt me
    I forgive you
    Can you forgive me?

  12. profile image0
    ralwusposted 6 years ago

    Rev. Gerald Gloom

    My wife had no inhibitions at all
    in selling my things at yard sale
    from the porch of my old house.
    It gave my beloved congregation the chance
    to have something which had belonged
    to me, in memoriam,
    she said.
    But that old steamer which was sold off
    to Henry, the pot pusher;
    did you know it contained the works of my lifetime
    and that he and my wife burned them in the fire pit
    as they sported together in my hammock
    that night in July?

  13. Ben Evans profile image71
    Ben Evansposted 6 years ago

    The water fall's spray fills the air
    The rainbow couldnt help it
    as the vapor and sun coalesce
    to bring color that fills
    the vista with completeness.

    Tampering causes a mixture
    that sometimes is so nice.
    Love, that never happened
    creates no pain
    as it pans into nothingness.

    Yet a colorful memory
    is always painted through experience.
    No matter the outcome.....
    It is not bleak and molds the heart
    for something better.

    I hear the roar of the water
    and look down.
    A bright reflection kisses my eye.
    I try to touch it.
    It is cold and refreshing.

    The water, while in no rush, goes down hill
    to the sea.

  14. yolanda yvette profile image61
    yolanda yvetteposted 6 years ago

    If you knew who I was you wouldn't talk to me like that.
    That's right, I'm talking to you.
    And wipe that smile off your face.
    Hold up!  Don't say a word until I'm through.

  15. Ben Evans profile image71
    Ben Evansposted 6 years ago

    A clear ring separates a
    contrived circle.
    The color endowed
    yet not aural
    is of life.

    A drop clear and pure
    is the end product of rain.
    It falls on the rock's slippery face
    and combines with others
    as they flow to the sea.

    The blue vastness
    meets a gray skyline
    while the saltiness
    is gained through mineral's grit.

    Magnificent and yet so calm
    is a peacefulness that can't be seen.

  16. Ginger Meow profile image77
    Ginger Meowposted 6 years ago

    Some say Part 1 was way too long,
    A new Part 2, what could be wrong?
    So lets kick this forum along,
    making words rhyme like song.

    Scribe your words at will,
    show the others your skill.
    Prose darts from inked quill,
    inspiring a creative thrill.

    I try to squint my tired eyes,
    block my ears of your cries.
    Listen to my heavy sighs,
    as I question your very lies.

    You can do it, I know it's true,
    there is a poem inside of you,
    Post one below, give us a clue,
    show us all the creative you!

  17. Joy56 profile image61
    Joy56posted 6 years ago

    cat's,love, and Monday Morning
      sun shining, snow melting,
      Families uniting,
      Year ending.
      Poetry being written.........
      What more could anyone ask for
      Really.................

  18. vietnamvet68 profile image61
    vietnamvet68posted 6 years ago

    What’s In Your Goody Drawer??

    A back massager with a charger
    A silver bullet or a string of beads
    Things that help fulfill your needs
    A thing of joy or a thing of pleasure
    A stress reliever or maybe a receiver
    Something to behold or something to hold
    Something you can not mention
    To give your stress a little attention
    To help you relieve all that tension
    The colors are bold, purple, red, green or gold
    The colors make it Oh so pretty to hold
    Is your goody drawer full and fun?
    Or does your goody drawer just hold one
    Shapes and sizes and styles may vary
    Is it something your mother would find scary?
    We all have our secrets, this is true
    I won’t tell yours, but hey what’s new
    Is it a secret only known to you
    Not for anyone else to view…………
    © S Weathers 2010

 
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