Sucking red popsicles Grinding teethJuicy cherry replace his lip stickPoison fang fly like birdsIntruding ladies in dark woodCaused it be the dirtiest horrorKissing pale boys He stroke her thighBiting her neck she shook in fearTeen watched this filmFear ariseBiting on popcorn to cool for a whileDrinking coke with lots of iceBut horror arose by movie desireAnd hearing girls scream in the back seatAnd guys cracking up in the front seatBut scream afterwardWhen the scariest man appear in 3D scene
My best guess: "Sucking" put you at the tripwireAnd"He stroke her thigh" tripped you over it.
um, you may want to recheck your grammar and usage? I dunno...
Perhaps English isn't her first language, hence the mangled title of this thread? It's just a thought...
English is not my first language. Hoping that soon I can expand my English writing on hub!
Since you have posted your poem to this forum thread, it will not be allowed to be published as a hub.Hubpages doesn't allow duplicate content. Everything must be original.
I published it as a hub before I post it on forum, it wouldn't allow me to published it because of wording. I think "Sucking" and "stroking thigh" is the problem. I'm not sure. That's why I asked. Maybe I have grammar or my English suck. lol
punctuation maybe. cant be the wording from what i see. now subject matter on the other hand. i hate twilight movies. lol ray
I don't thing it was the risque language or the subject matter. I have used swear words and alluded to masturbation in my poems.
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