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Why hub doesn't letting me published this poem?

  1. chanroth profile image70
    chanrothposted 5 years ago

    Sucking red popsicles
    Grinding teeth
    Juicy cherry replace his lip stick

    Poison fang fly like birds
    Intruding ladies in dark wood
    Caused it be the dirtiest horror

    Kissing pale boys
    He stroke her thigh
    Biting her neck she shook in fear

    Teen watched this film
    Fear arise
    Biting on popcorn to cool for a while

    Drinking coke with lots of ice
    But horror arose by movie desire
    And hearing girls scream in the back seat

    And guys cracking up in the front seat
    But scream afterward
    When the scariest man appear in 3D scene

  2. paradigmsearch profile image88
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    My best guess: smile

    "Sucking" put you at the tripwire

    And

    "He stroke her thigh" tripped you over it.

  3. bonnebartron profile image74
    bonnebartronposted 5 years ago

    um, you may want to recheck your grammar and usage? I dunno...

    1. AdeleCosgroveBray profile image90
      AdeleCosgroveBrayposted 5 years ago in reply to this






      Perhaps English isn't her first language, hence the mangled title of this thread?  It's just a thought...

  4. chanroth profile image70
    chanrothposted 5 years ago

    English is not my first language. Hoping that soon I can expand my English writing on hub!

  5. Cagsil profile image61
    Cagsilposted 5 years ago

    Since you have posted your poem to this forum thread, it will not be allowed to be published as a hub.

    Hubpages doesn't allow duplicate content. Everything must be original.

  6. chanroth profile image70
    chanrothposted 5 years ago

    I published it as a hub before I post it on forum, it wouldn't allow me to published it because of wording. I think "Sucking" and "stroking thigh" is the problem. I'm not sure. That's why I asked. Maybe I have grammar or my English suck. lol

  7. aware profile image69
    awareposted 5 years ago

    punctuation  maybe.  cant be the wording  from what i see. now subject matter on the other hand. i hate twilight  movies. lol
    ray

  8. chanroth profile image70
    chanrothposted 5 years ago

    lol....

  9. Tallgardener profile image59
    Tallgardenerposted 5 years ago

    I don't thing it was the risque language or the subject matter. I have used swear words and alluded to masturbation in my poems.

 
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