YOU THINK I AM A DAMN FOOL

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  1. PTAYLOR9366 profile image52
    PTAYLOR9366posted 9 years ago

    YOU THINK I AM A DAMN FOOL
    YOU THINK YOU CAN DEPEND ON ME
    YOU ONLY CALL ME WHEN YOU WANT SOMETHING
    YOU CALL ME TO BUY YOU SOME CIG.
    YOU CALL ME TO BRING OUR GRANDCHILD OVER
    YOU CALL ME JUST TO TELL ME
    YOU STILL LOVE ME
    YOU THINK I AM A DAMN FOOL
    YOU WANT ME TO STOP THE DIVORCE
    BEFORE IT BECOME FINALLY
    YOU ASK ME TO DO SOMETHING
    WITH YOU
    YOU BAGG ME TO DO STUFF FOR YOU
    YOU THINK I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
    THAT I DO ANYTHING FOR YOU
    GUESS WHAT THAT LOVE IS GONE
    I DONT LOVE YOU NO MORE
    I WISH I NEVER MET YOU
    I CAN'T STAND YOU
    YOU ARE TO JEALOUS
    YOU EVEN JEALOUS OF MY KIDS
    BUT THAT OK
    I KNOW FOR FACT
    YOU THINK I AM A DAMN FOOL
    THAT FUNNY

    1. ahpoetic profile image54
      ahpoeticposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      I'm like you, getting calls only for favors,
      attracting losers wanting to sleep on my couch,
      getting invited over to help move,
      being fed only to be asked for money.
      I'm sought out to buy something from them
      as a client being done a speacial service
      as they brag about how they convinced
      me to pay them to be my source.
      But I'm on to their scheme and don't know
      when I'm getting paid and I'm too busy to
      allow him in to fool me into helping to start
      his car at 6:00 AM. She calls me in
      between drinks, but my time is taken by
      enough common sense to avoid a drunk
      looking for a desperate lover to cart her
      around from bar to bar with her jail bird
      son who needs a place to live for a while
      until he can contrive a plan to rob a store
      or bank or steal from me to support
      his habit. I'm not a fool, needing losers
      to mooch from me, calling me buddy or
      baby.

      1. SweetiePie profile image84
        SweetiePieposted 9 years agoin reply to this

        Your poetry is very thought provoking.  I hope you do write a few hubs about it smile.

        1. ahpoetic profile image54
          ahpoeticposted 9 years agoin reply to this

          Thank you, SweetiePie. You can go to poetry.com and read more of my poems. I'm a writer with two books published. A Killer Story and Miraculous New Life for Ellie. They are on www.amazon.com. You can also get my books at borders and barnes and nobles. And I've got a kids book, Dinosaur Haunt, coming out in January. I'm just finishing a book of poery to be submitted to my publisher in about two weeks. Check out my website, www.holseybooks.com.

  2. Marisa Wright profile image96
    Marisa Wrightposted 9 years ago

    Hi PTaylor.  Why don't you make a Hub with your poems instead of posting them on the forums?

  3. weblog profile image54
    weblogposted 9 years ago

    One more thing, using ALL CAPS is not advisable smile

  4. Nickny79 profile image67
    Nickny79posted 9 years ago

    I think the caps are very effective.

    1. weblog profile image54
      weblogposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Not everyone feels the same smile

      Uppercase posts are considered as SHOUTING in today's internet language.

      1. Nickny79 profile image67
        Nickny79posted 9 years agoin reply to this

        That's funny, I scarcely hear a thing.  Furthermore, poetry is ART and we should celebrate free expression in that context, even if it entails "shouting."

        1. weblog profile image54
          weblogposted 9 years agoin reply to this

          I was just giving an information smile

          1. SweetiePie profile image84
            SweetiePieposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            I agree with you weblog, you still have the right to share information.  Yes, all caps is considered shouting online and you were just pointing this out.  Not sure why some people are being so defensive about it.

  5. royalblkrose profile image61
    royalblkroseposted 9 years ago

    all caps means one is yelling. maybe that's the effect the writer wanted...

 
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