This is my first post on this thread and as a transfered Lensmaster I am serious about creating great hubs so I would appreciate any input on the following "from scratch" hub.
http://robertzimmerman2.hubpages.com/hu … s-for-Kids
Hope I posted this properly and thanks in advance!
I didn't have time to read the entire hub, but it looks really good. Yes, you set it up right.
It looks good, but I feel each drum needs some description to explain what you think each drum is appropriate for.
I just read your hub and liked it a lot. Please be aware, though, that threads with links to your hubs are frowned upon at hubpages. I understand that you just wanted the community to check and assure you that you are doing hubs correctly, but keep the policy in mind.
This Hub was posted in the "Improving Your Hub" section, which was created for the sole purpose of posting links to your own Hubs and asking for feedback - so he did the right thing.
Bob hope you are on the right track. I like to get a good example to follow.
I'd like to see some info on products - especially what ages items are suitable for.
A few typos spotted: "You can have Family Drum Circle just for the fun of it." "creatinve "
Bob, this looks great. I would add that I'd love to see the text broken up a bit more with some nice images or video integrated. This really keeps the readers going along. I've used this tool repeatedly in my own hubs, and I'm almost religious with it!
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