I think you need to make it clear who needs what particular type of insurance. Group together the types needed by the raptured people, then place in another group the types needed by those who are left behind. Put the pictures at the beginning of each insurance type rather than the end, and place your poll survey at the end of the article. That should help.
When writing, consider what information your reader is looking for and don't include information they don't want.
In this case, both the tables are irrelevant, they don't contain any info that your reader is looking for.
There is far too much repetition in the article - every paragraph starts by repeating the warning about damage from unmanned machinery. I would explain that ONCE, at the start of the article, giving examples of the kind of damage that would cause, then you don't have to explain it again and again. Right now, all that repetition sounds as though you are deliberately padding out the article with needless repetition.
I would add one more option on your poll - "I don't care".
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