I'd like feedback on my article: Why to participate in creating hub pages? Is...

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   sangamkrposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Why to participate in creating hub pages? Is it worth writing articles here?How does it help a blogger?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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   Bede le Venerableposted 7 years ago

   Hi there, your article is interesting and has some good points. However, there several issues you need to correct. For starters, your title is very ponderous and does not follow APA guidelines for capitalization. In essence, these are as follows:
   
   1.    Capitalize the first word of your title and subtitles.
   2.    Capitalize all major words such as nouns, verbs, adverbs, etc. For instance, you need to capitalize the verb “is.” Any hyphenated words need to be capitalized.
   3.    Capitalize all words of four letters or more.
   
   Remove the Amazon capsule, unless you can give evidence of your experience with the product. I recommend reading it slowly and fix the grammatical mistakes. Make sure to source your images properly.

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   sangamkrposted 7 years ago

   My Amazon link is relevant. I have used this capsule to confirm that hub writers  earn money from affiliate links. Tell me why I should remove that capsule.

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   theraggededgeposted 7 years ago

   Hi there,
   
   This article may have been featured several years ago, but HubPages' standards have been raised significantly.
   
   There are many grammatical errors throughout.
   
   There are many factual errors also. There are no 'side-by-side' capsules any longer. There is no eBay affiliate arrangement. There are no 'editors' pics'. You cannot promote your own products. You cannot promote your own blog or website.
   
   HubPages is one word. Look up above to see how it is written.
   
   This is one of the points in your table: "Take Care of Grammer, Spelling and Punctuation." It's not 'grammer', it's 'grammar'. The last thing you want is a glaring error like that.
   
   This article would need a complete rewrite to bring it up to the required standard.
   
   And... your Amazon capsule does not comply with current guidelines.

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   Beth Eaglescliffeposted 7 years ago

   This may sound harsh, but the fact that you do not currently have a single featured article means you do not understand what is now required to be successful here.
   
   I suggest you try writing on other topics before your start advising others on how to write for HubPages.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 7 years ago

   "Page Does Not Exist"
   
   ...gee, I can't imagine why. (shrugs)

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