I'd like feedback on my article: Best Places to Travel. Attractive Places...

Jump to Last Post 1-4 of 4 discussions (6 posts)
  1. Sheeri Malik profile image61
    Sheeri Malikposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    My article got featured and then I try to submit this on Wanderwisdom but unfortunately my article couldn't be selected. I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Best Places to Travel. Attractive Places Across the Globe. Everyone Should Visit Before They Die.

    1. Eurofile profile image97
      Eurofileposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      I have just tried to get the link up, but it doesn't work. So I am struggling to give any advice on your specific article. My best suggestion would be to work through the help available on Hub Pages and take any advice you can. Maybe also read other similar articles to see how others write and learn from them. It took me a while to learn the ropes. Don't be discouraged. We all had to start somewhere. If you persevere, you will get there in the end.

  2. Natalie Frank profile image96
    Natalie Frankposted 7 months ago

    You're Title and headings are not formatted properly.  The other thing that they require for Wanderwisdom now is that you have been to the places you are writing about and can offer personal commentary on them, like tips for vising each one. The other thing is that this topic is covered extensively already and you don't add anything new.  Usually this isn't enough for a niche site.  If you go back to where you submit the article there will be notes on why they didn't accept it.

    1. Sheeri Malik profile image61
      Sheeri Malikposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your feedback. I'll try to submit this on another one after editing it.

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 months ago

    There are several issues.

    Images must be Creative Commons licensed; you can't just lift them off websites.

    There are numerous grammar errors. Try to find someone for whom English is their first language to guide you.

    Your topic is far from unique. A Google search for the Eiffel Tower brings up 140 million hits. Your other featured locations are similarly covered massively.

    You should spend time at the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

    But the quality of your English usage is the major problem.

  4. Natalie Frank profile image96
    Natalie Frankposted 7 months ago

    You're welcome.  Just keep in mind it's not the niche site that's the issue - Wanderwisdom is where you'd want to submit it.  But with the problems everyone has mentioned unless you rewrite it and make it more unique with personal information along with cleaning it up, it's not likely to be accepted.


This website uses cookies

As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://hubpages.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

Show Details
HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)
ClickscoThis is a data management platform studying reader behavior (Privacy Policy)