need feedback on 3 articles, don’t know what I’m doing wrong.

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  1. Kaoru27Umi profile image67
    Kaoru27Umiposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process.

    I’ve published 3 articles already that passed just fine. My newest three, for some reason, are not passing and I don’t understand why. I tried editing, changing words, adding more text and pictures... so I’m a little confused. I’m not writing my articles any different than my first ones.

    If someone could I’d really appreciate it. Thanks!
    Here is my article: Hideo Kojima Claims Most Bad "Death Stranding" Reviews Are From America (must be signed in to view)

    1. greenmind profile image96
      greenmindposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Try taking out all of the links and resubmitting.

      1. Kaoru27Umi profile image67
        Kaoru27Umiposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

        Okay I'll try doing that, thank you!

  2. AliciaC profile image97
    AliciaCposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi. I have some suggestions. First, I would proofread the article carefully to check for grammar errors. The article contains a few punctuation mistakes, sentence fragments, and other errors.

    All of the photos should have a suitable license for use.

    It would be good if you added more information about the game and defined some of the game terms that you’ve used. This is especially important because the inclusion of the quotations makes the length of the original content in your article shorter than it seems.

    The “Get your copy” sentence above the Amazon capsule sounds very commercial and should perhaps be changed or eliminated.

    1. Kaoru27Umi profile image67
      Kaoru27Umiposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the feedback. I'll try reading it over again and see if I can add some extra explanation to the game. I'll also tinker the picture url and delete the "get your copy". Hopefully that'll work. Thanks again!

  3. Kenna McHugh profile image91
    Kenna McHughposted 4 weeks ago

    You need to take the time and proofread the article. You have blaring mistakes.  Such as a period (.) in one of your capsule titles.  Amazon capsule links are frowned upon, and you need to link within the content.
    You are on the right track, but you need to edit your piece. Good luck!

    1. Kaoru27Umi profile image67
      Kaoru27Umiposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the feedback. I fixed the one capsule title. May I ask why Amazon capsule links are frowned upon? If I'm referencing a game, wouldn't it be complimentary to link to the game in some way? I had done that with a previous article about the same game and that one published just fine. I'm still confused as I'm all new to this! Again thank you!

      1. theraggededge profile image98
        theraggededgeposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

        It's better to use an inline text link. Amazon capsules are hidden by adblockers.

        Highlight the anchor text, click on the link icon, select the Amazon tab and you should see the item in the list.

        1. Kaoru27Umi profile image67
          Kaoru27Umiposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

          Okay, gotcha. Thanks for letting me know.

  4. Kenna McHugh profile image91
    Kenna McHughposted 4 weeks ago

    HP changes with the whims of Google. It's explained in HP guidelines.


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