I'd like feedback on my article: A Trip To Remember, Nainital In India

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  1. Suchismita pradhan profile image70
    Suchismita pradhanposted 4 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: A Trip To Remember, Nainital In India

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    1. AliciaC profile image93
      AliciaCposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      One problem is the map capsule. I know it’s not your fault if the map defaults to San Francisco. I sometimes have that problem, too. If you can’t get the capsule to show India, however, it would be better to delete it. It looks bad to show a map of California when your article and the place names under the map are related to India.

      Like your other articles, this one is interesting. You should check the article carefully for English errors. For example,”Here I am writing a few places that I visited” in the first capsule is incorrect. In the Khurpa Tal capsule, the word “mesmorize” is used incorrectly. The article contains additional language errors that you need to correct. Good luck.

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    2. Eurofile profile image96
      Eurofileposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      I usually find that if I save the map capsule at the right location it sticks. But, if all else fails, I agree with Linda. It's better to remove it than show an incorrect location.
      I'm guessing that English might not be your first language. If you change the first sentence to "help your lungs function properly with pollution-free oxygen", it will read better. It might help if you focus on simpler and shorter sentences instead of trying to be too complex. You don't need "called", a semi colon will do. If you put "in June 2018 on a 3-day trip" it works better.
      I struggled enough to write in American English for HubPages. A free download of Grammarly has been a great help to me.
      The content and structure of this article is good. If you tighten up the grammar, it will be fine. Your perseverance will pay off in the end.

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      1. Suchismita pradhan profile image70
        Suchismita pradhanposted 4 years agoin reply to this

        Thank you so much for your help.

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