I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: The benifit of vanilla (must be signed in to view)
This is not an article. It is a bunch of lists and a recipe. You need to spend some time reading the articles in the Learning Center (Help button, upper right) to learn how to properly write and format an article for publication on HubPages.
Good evening miss Ashly R. I was reading your article. You need to edit and proofread. You will find the mistakes. You need to read the learning center at hubpages. You will find the rules.
Your article is a spun and slightly rearranged copy of the one at https://ezinearticles.com/?The-Art-of-V … d=10278649 .
In addition, the title of your article contains a spelling error and the photo is from a commercial company.
I'm here too, will anyone listen to me? Mam, please guide me a little. Why aren't my articles being published? Please highlight my mistakes so that I can improve them. Here is the link of my article,
It's not a good idea to post on someone else's thread because most forum members won't see your post.
It's better to post your own thread, here: https://hubpages.com/forum/category/7463
It's not a good to send your asking in my question,don't post on someone else's thread in another time.
Ok i am going to publish it again so that you can take a look.
As Alicia says, you need to cite your images properly:
https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
Be sure to read it when you have time. I will be so greatful for your kindness.
I see that you've written an article about mental health. That can be a tricky topic. The article contains some sentences that need to be improved and you need to make sure that the photos have a suitable license for use on HubPages. I think the main problem is the topic, though.
If you're going to write about dreams being shattered and reality becoming bitter, as your title says, you need to create a bio for display at the top of the article that shows your qualifications for writing about the problems and for helping people to solve them. You should also think about including references and a medical disclaimer.
You should probably give some hint that you are going to offer suggestions to help people near the beginning of the article because the first three text capsules are quite depressing. It would be good to indicate that you intend to help people in the title as well.
You might want to think about changing the category of the article to the religion one. You say that God created the reader for a purpose and that God is omnipotent. Of course, there's nothing wrong with sharing your beliefs, but not everyone agrees with them. Someone who doesn't agree with them may stop reading your article when they see the word "God" and won't be helped by what you have to say.
Good luck with the article.
Thanks so much for explaining so well. I will try to overcome the shortcomings you have mentioned. I am new and just learning. You, Eric and theraggedadge,You have mastered your art and I'm going to learn a lot from your articles. Stay blessed.
Thank you very much for your time. Should I change my title too? Or just focus on summary, bio and pictures.
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