I'd like feedback on my article: Unsolved Enigma of Happiness

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  1. nileshjaybhaye profile image54
    nileshjaybhayeposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Unsolved Enigma of Happiness (must be signed in to view)

  2. AliciaC profile image99
    AliciaCposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi. You need to proofread the article carefully in order to correct the English errors. The sources for each photo should show that they have a suitable license for use on HubPages. The third photo is watermarked and can’t be used. The paragraph in the third text capsule is very long.

    I think it would be good if you wrote about your qualifications related to the article in the bio at the top of the article. I have to say that I found the contents of the last text capsule problematic. I don’t think that accepting everything as it is will make someone who is suffering from a very painful or frightening disease or situation happy. Perhaps you could take this into account.

    1. nileshjaybhaye profile image54
      nileshjaybhayeposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      Ok I will add the Bio regarding the topic and regarding the issue of accepting everything as it is, I want to explain that -- when anyone accepts that --one is suffering from frightening disease or situation without resisting it and thinking that "why he is suffering and why he is only facing all of this adverse in his life "? then automatically those suffering or adverse circumstances don't bother him or her much and don't be the reason for "any sadness" or "loss of happiness in life"  and he can see for solutions, treatments or next possible ways to deal his condition

      This is what I want to tell through my article

      I have seen the patients who are terminally ill due to cancer or other debilitating condition but still, they are happy with it, as they have accepted their fate and now want to "enjoy" remaining days without making lamb faces in medical wards

      In everybody's life, things go wrong, but those wrong things must not be needed to make the reason for miseries in one's life

      1. OldRoses profile image97
        OldRosesposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

        This is good information, but it belongs in your article, not here.  Readers will have the same questions as Alicia, so you should provide the explanation in the article.

        1. nileshjaybhaye profile image54
          nileshjaybhayeposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

          i have added one quote from Famous Psychologist Carl Jung supporting my claim in article will that be fine ? or i need to elucidate it in more detail ?

 
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