I have hundreds of classics like that, Misbah. In fact, people call them romantic. I do not tell them I'm speaking to God. Some sense it, so don't. Think of Allah and use the creative side of your nature. Many say wrong things about Rumi's poems, because of the way he wrote.
Think of Allah as a man bringing you gifts, showering you with praises and make use of flowers and the cosmos to describe this Love. Go into your feelings and touch on how the Heart feels and the fact that Love alone will do, nothing else.
Explain how much you yearn or pine for Him, That you offer your life or death for His feet. Don't use divine words, but let your Heart be Divine and you'd do well. Peace.