I'd like feedback on my article: Why You Need to Run off From That Toxic...

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   Nyamweyaposted 7 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Why You Need to Run off From That Toxic Marriage

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      PT Richardposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      I hope venting your feelings in this article made you feel a little better!

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         theraggededgeposted 7 months agoin reply to this

         And he says in the article that he's single. Wonder why he hates women so much? It's not his only anti-women hub either.

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            Nyamweyaposted 7 months agoin reply to this

            You see controversy sells, such controversial articles ignites action and readership which actually helps in driving a lot of traffic.

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               theraggededgeposted 7 months agoin reply to this

               Nah... out-of-date attitudes expressed in that way make me press the Back button.

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         Nyamweyaposted 7 months agoin reply to this

         Dont forget there are women feminists too and they are entitled to their opinions

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      WriterJanisposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Wow. I can see the hatred in your article here. Are you also planning to write an article about how women need to run off from a toxic marriage?
      
      On a technical note, you need to credit your image and be sure it's properly licensed. Also, your paragraphs are too big. They should be broken down into smaller text modules with headings.
      
      You have a ton of articles, but it doesn't seem like they're on any of HubPages niche sites. I hope you listen to advice being given to you here.

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         Nyamweyaposted 7 months agoin reply to this

         There are actually several of them on the niche sites, check here https://turbofuture.com/consumer-electr … ould-I-Buy

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            Nyamweyaposted 7 months agoin reply to this

            Here is another perfectly written piece https://owlcation.com/humanities/A-crit … ns-in-Love

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      OldRosesposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Are you aware that you are trying to publish on an American site and in the US, what you write is considered very offensive?  You need to have more cultural sensitivity when publishing on foreign (to you) sites.
      
      You are fortunate that commenting is not allowed on HubPages otherwise, you would be extremely disappointed in the feedback that you receive on this article from readers who are mainly American.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 7 months ago

   He's been given loads of advice but ignores it all. I'm surprised he hasn't been banned over his misogynist views.

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      Nyamweyaposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      The advertises actually helps me to improve the articles, thats why they become featured afterwards and attract high level traffic

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         theraggededgeposted 7 months agoin reply to this

         So, please feel free to express appreciation for those who go to the trouble of helping you.

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            Nyamweyaposted 7 months agoin reply to this

            Sure sure, I will certainly been doing that

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