So you think you can write?

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   katiem2posted 12 years ago

   Prove it!
   
   I’ll start with one sentence; each hubber adds the next sentence creating an engaging and interesting story.
   
   
   I began to question myself, as the doubt sent chills up my spine I turned reaching for the door knob.

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   ediggityposted 12 years ago

   As I slowly turned the cold copper knob, it squeaked, as if to warn me what was on the other side.

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      katiem2posted 12 years agoin reply to this

      Ewwwwww good
      
      Okay who's next?

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         Cathyrinposted 12 years agoin reply to this

         But before I force myself to enter the door, a ghastly scream swathe the whole room.

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            katiem2posted 12 years agoin reply to this

            Now were moving....

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   barryrutherfordposted 12 years ago

   A chill ran up my spine my limbs froze as I held my breath

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   habeeposted 12 years ago

   The scream was gutteral, yet at the same time, piercing - almost primeval and savage in its resonance.

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      katiem2posted 12 years agoin reply to this

      really good use of discriptive words... awesome

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   manlypoetrymanposted 12 years ago

   My heart froze still in my chest from the eerie scream, as I saw a moonlit silhouette in the corner.

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   habeeposted 12 years ago

   The figure was shrouded in the pale moonlight and appeared to be almost ephemeral.

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   2uesdayposted 12 years ago

   My heart was pounding, it felt as if it might burst out of my ribs.

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   Pcunixposted 12 years ago

   "Am I dreaming?", I whispered aloud.

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      katiem2posted 12 years agoin reply to this

      anybody scared yet?

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   manlypoetrymanposted 12 years ago

   "What did I just see?" I thought to myself, while trying to breath.

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    Suddenly a cold hand clamped a fierce grip on my wrist.

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    manlypoetrymanposted 12 years ago

    I realized how foolish I had been to enter this haunted house alone.

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    ediggityposted 12 years ago

    Come here, a voice called, but I pretended not to hear.

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    The grasp grew tighter as I was pulled toward the other room.

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    habeeposted 12 years ago

    My feet felt like lead as I was pulled along by the dark force.

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    I felt a warm glow from the other room as a longing to go inside grew deep within me.

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    2uesdayposted 12 years ago

    My mind raced as I tried to remember how they dealt with situations like this in horror movies.

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    Yet still I found myself walking willingly as the grip on my wrist grew gentle, warm and inviting.

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    manlypoetrymanposted 12 years ago

    I heard in a far away faint, yet gruff voice, "None Shall Pass!"

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    Quickly another hand grasp my dangling hand, I was now being pulled by two forces.

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    "None shall pass? WTF?" I wondered aloud.

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       katiem2posted 12 years agoin reply to this

       cool keep  it coming...

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    Urged forward by these two unseen hands grasping my wrist I swallowed hard, knowing intuitively where this was heading.

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    manlypoetrymanposted 12 years ago

    "That is very peculiar?" I thought to myself, while I could feel the grasps getting tighter and tighter.

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    manlypoetrymanposted 12 years ago

    "My reality must be twisted," I believed within my own uncertainty, after drinking 2 coconut chocolate B-12 Smoothies while watching old horror movies and Monty Python reruns.

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    The strange yet hauting questioned begged, "would there be popcorn?"

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       manlypoetrymanposted 12 years agoin reply to this

       "In heaven?"...because I think I'm about to die from total and complete fear.

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    Just as I had expected my heart stopped, it became heavy in my chest as all the blood rushed from my head.

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    Once again I was left scratcthing my head (and clutching my heaving chest), wondering who would be screaming, "Now we're moving!" and what on earth did it mean?

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    Suddenly the door slammed behind us as I was drug into the room, what is that horrible smell?

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    The assault on my senses continued, as the sickly sweet smell of decomposing flesh filled my nostrils and tested my gag reflex.

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    The darkness grew as I could only feel the warm breath on my neck from the figure pressing their body against me nudging me along.

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       Home Girlposted 12 years agoin reply to this

       And then I woke up. But my reality was much more sinister than my horrible dream, in fact it was some crazy continuation of my dream. Blood was everywhere, and I was on the floor in the middle of it. I tried to move but...

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    I tried to move but...
    I was terrified of leaving footprints in the blood that could link me to ... to what, I wasn't quite sure, but knew it couldn't be good!

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    katiem2posted 12 years ago

    What is that, I thought as a cold wet blade was placed in my hand.

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    getitriteposted 12 years ago

    The size and sharpness of the blade made me feel the type of anxiety that one feels while standing at the edge of a cliff.

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    To my horror, I saw that the wetness was the color of fresh, AB negative blood.

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    getitriteposted 12 years ago

    I, hesitantly, took the sword, realizing that my former life as a ninja had finally caught up with me.

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    It was hard to face the reality that 700 years of ninja-ing meant nothing -- centuries of training, the supreme wisdom of my sensei -- had left me woefully uprepared me for this situation.

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    lorlie6posted 12 years ago

    With lightning fast ninjaesque reflexes, I began to run with no destination in mind.

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    getitriteposted 12 years ago

    While running, I silently pledged my Kuji-in chant.

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    It has kept me safe from untold horrors in the past -- would it protect me against the evils I knew awaited me down the hall?

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    lorlie6posted 12 years ago

    My amazing running came to a sickening halt as my body slammed into the wall.

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       katiem2posted 12 years agoin reply to this

       This is getting chilling...

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    getitriteposted 12 years ago

    Dazed and bruised, I felt a chilling wind begin to grow, as the shadows danced, menacingly, around me.

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    Chill winds were no stranger to me; but in all my 700 years I had never seen more menacing shadows!

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    getitriteposted 12 years ago

    Suddenly, I now knew who had mysteriously placed the sword in my hand, and as a highly trained assassin, I knew what my mission was.

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    Denise Handlonposted 12 years ago

    I knew I had to move quickly with this realization before it escaped me again.

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    It was truly puzzling why my focus kept blurring, as realizations came to me and just as quickly disappeared!

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    getitriteposted 12 years ago

    But I had to remain lucid, as I was, now, engaged in mortal combat with his mercenaries, and every swing of my sword had to be accurate.

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    Mighty Momposted 12 years ago

    But the blinding combination of blood and cold sweat required me to rely on instinct, as I alternately thrust and parried my way into the next room.

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    Ghost32posted 12 years ago

    Which, I realized fully one tenth of a second too late, was a trap.

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       Denise Handlonposted 12 years agoin reply to this

        

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    getitriteposted 12 years ago

    Standing in the middle of the room were two ninja she-devils, with their irresistably exotic, and erotic, but deadly bodies.

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    WuldUStilRemebrMeposted 12 years ago

    "oooo La la, Hey baby" cooed one of the ninga she-devils as she slinked on past with her eyes flashing a steely silver hue.

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    getitriteposted 12 years ago

    Knowing that seduction is the she devil's primary weapon, I knew I could not give in to their advances, lest I would never reach my target--their master--alive!

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