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Short story:Daddy's Love! Not Again!

Updated on March 9, 2014

Daddy’s Love!

It all felt just like if it was only yesterday where Daddy and his little girl were enjoying a walk. He felt so proud of his little girl, how she had grown, that sometimes he would become almost dumbfounded, looking at her.

She was his light in what he had long considered to be a very dark world he was living in.

The words were always there, but still, he held this reservation for his family! He felt like if he was being treathened and tormented by the Devil himself.

After losing his two sons, they were both killed in an automobile accident coming home from a football game. This bought on a type of fear ever since, which caused Dad to be suffering with quite a lot of nervous ailments. But he was quite a strong believer in God, and since that accident, he was even more so.

Now his only daughter had just reached an age where she was able to be driving , but with a another driver present. Dad's fears have again started running a mock in his life. He would try to do every possible favor, his daughter would need, he would always pray with the family, asking the Most High to guide and protect them all . His beautiful family.

At times when she was younger, he would get so worried; he sometimes could not speak,his mind would keep on racing, he didn't know what he would do, if she was ever to be taken away abruptly from him.

But he quickly realized that only God would understand what his daughter meant to him , because he did not ask for things to be that way with him. All he ever wanted was a beautiful God fearing family, and with God’s grace he would do everything in his power to have it that way.

His beautiful daughter was now grown up , and he would always give thanks and praises to God, for all his blessing, and that his daughter had now grown up and getting ready to go off to this Christian college of her choice.

He would always joke with his wife , boasting about her height and , teasing his wife how much more beautiful than her she is, but his wife will say in return , that she looks like her, so he must Give thanks, and it was so , she looked more like her mother. Taller than her Mom, but they looked almost identical in every other comparism. Sometimes so difficult for people in telling them apart, they actually loved it, and it became something the expected from people.

A little in the voice would at time tell that difference, as her mother’s voice was more seasoned and matured , see being a member in the church choir for twenty years played its part..

He would always called her Daddy's beautiful daughter and they would laugh as he would

Always confirm his love and admiration to God and them also. Sometimes while looking at her he would smile, and then shake his head. She would return a smile, and walk up too him for their special hug!

This day Daddy picked had picked her up on his way home from work. She had timed her day at the library real well, so her Dad won’t have to wait, although she knew that he would be more than happy to wait, all day if need be, and without a frown. She knew he is the greatest Dad any daughter could ever have and she was overly proud of him.

Mom has already told her that dinner this day, was fast food. She must pick up some

Chinese food at their favorite spot, on her way home, so she told dad and all was well.

Since she had already ordered, and the neighborhood restaurant was also on the way it should all work out fine.

As they pulled up to the restaurant daddy’s little girl did not hesitate, for she was also hungry, and she love the food at this place, and they knew her well. She walked into the store, while dad waited in the car across the street, for the restaurant also shared parking with a laundry mart and a convenience store, and all the parking was filled. As Dad waited, five minutes had passed and Daddy was just about

To exit the car as he saw his daughter, coming out the restaurant with what looked like a hand around her neck, this person looked dangerous and not a face he had seen before. He was holding something to her head, he could not she, before he could realize what was really happening, she glanced in the direction where Daddy was parked, he saw a red car and they went into the car and sped away before he could even exit his car.

He decided to follow the car as they, did not noticed that he was following them. He dialed 911 and told the operator what was happening and answered all her questions while chasing the red car with tinted windows.

Daddy’s Love!


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To be continued …………


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks and greatly appreciated tillsontitan.

      Always a great pleasure having you read and comment on these, means a lot, and it;s quite encouraging.

      Thanks for those always positive vibes? I always look forward.

      Great news ! As for Part (2)it's already out, and I am working on part three, which also keep me going, with the amount of great angles I ask for guidance and I think I received . God is great.

      Thanks for your great words and such a suggestion, I already got the song. Will apply to nicely to part(3)

      Thanks again and God's Blessings to you and yours.

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      Mary Craig 6 years ago from New York

      Okay, I'm on the edge of my seat with baited breath and any other cliche you can think of to say I'm waiting for part two. Your stories are always so good and your constant acknowledgement of the role God plays in our lives is really enlightening. You do so well. Please keep that girl AND her father safe in Part two. We're all rooting for her.

      God Bless. Voted up.

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      Mrs L A Gibb 6 years ago

      Thank you. I do know he wrote it about his Daughter, Ali. when she was sixteen. Genius of a man. But Some times being a genius can make you stupid at times. lol. I met some people like this. I wonder how stupid he could get, heard he can act so daft at times lol.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Lol how are you so wise? Request granted! This was supposed to be the final chapter and that's where it would be , but I would hope part three is the final , and there it would be.

      Thanks for being so thoughtful.


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      Mrs L A Gibb 6 years ago

      As you know I love the Bee Gees, can I make a request please. Barry gibb Wrote a song called Daddies little Girl. I think you can find that on the you tube.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you very much Eddy . I know that we are all aware that consistency is the key to achieving just about anything this life presents , and here I am proud to say that goes the same in the goodwill others bestow on you. Thanks for your constant good will and positive words of encouragement .

      Part two awaits.

      A bless day to you and yours Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant Sky what a gem and I cannot wait for part 2.

      An up up and away here wihtout a doubt.

      Take care and enjoy your day.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      God is great Ann, and thank you very much . I see so many possibilities , all I would do is put myself in his and everyone who commented . So I thank you all and I would give it the best I have , because I love the story.

      Thanks again Ann ... Bless.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      My bad I get tied up with these new commands , I answered both and approved one , I am glad I did the best thing first.

      Thanks again brethren !


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      anndavis25 6 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Don't you dare let that girl get hurt...There must be an un natural intervention!

      Good start Sky.

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      I am so sure it will bless you :)

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Great to see you , great to hear from you, and great to know that you find this interesting , just like I know you would. It will make you smile and that's a great hint.

      Thank Mrslagibb. I will put a Bee Gee to top it off.


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      Mrs L A Gibb 6 years ago

      Now you making me wonder what's comming in part 2. Will it be a happy ending with 'Daddy's Love' or a sad one. I guess, I will never know what the twist in this beautiful hub will be til I come back to finish the reading story off.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      My brethren Frank I thank you as sincere, as I always do . Your words are always greatly appreciated .

      Some where in my heart there is a great relation to this story. So I wrote a what if, using my truth about any what if? I could ever possibly be involved in.

      Th end will be great.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks you Cardisa . Ok , though I bluntly refused to forget all my precious past comments from folks like you , one of those I am sure of the future once Jah continues his Guidance. Because I am a grateful soul who prides on never forgetting why I became grateful to begin with, you are already in the book!

      This one is also a result of my gratitude, so I am delighted that you like it as much as you said , I am inspired and encouraged.

      Sincere thanks, for watching you grow is a hard habit to break, so I always look forward.

      The story is actually a combination of both, but the truth came from that which I know happens with just about every proud daddy out there with their daughters. It's more obvious with the daughters.

      Part two which is where I will stop with shed some more light.

      This is so positive coming from you , because I already know where you are heading , so all I need is for you to remember ,to ask me what I knew!

      Thanks Cardisa.


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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      oh boy now he's following his little girl I hope 911 was able to dispatch help for poor ole daddy :( so far so good Sky :)

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      Carolee Samuda 6 years ago from Jamaica

      Sky, forget all the other compliments I have ever given you. This is the best darn hub you have ever written! I love it and the story has great potential. I am wondering if it is based on a true story or is it just fiction?


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