I'd like feedback on my article: Silence is not the answer

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   Justine Mulengaposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Silence is not the answer (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      peachpurpleposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Add in pictures, you can get them from Pixabay, then you can add in callouts of Prayers

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         Justine Mulengaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thank so much

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      Gregory DeVictorposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Your article is inundated with all kinds of grammatical and spelling errors. (For example, a sentence always begins with a capital letter.) Therefore, you need to read and reread this useful HP web page:
      
      https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … iting-Tips
      
      Good luck.

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         Gregory DeVictorposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Here is another HP article that you should read and reread:
         
         https://owlcation.com/humanities/Writin … -Sentences

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            Gregory DeVictorposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Here an example of a run-on sentence from your article:
            
            “It's not that Jesus didn't hear the request, he heard but his time had not come to act and obviously the woman of Canaan through her inner witness knew that she would get what she went to see Jesus for.”
            
            Here are some two links that explain what run-on sentences are and how to fix them:
            
            https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writ … nsentences
            
            https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/educa … -sentences
            
            Remember, you must capitalize the first letter of a sentence. In this paragraph, you did not capitalize the first letter of two different sentences:
            
            "some people who backslide in churches are not always influenced by demons but the church leaders. some leaders don't know how to connect the needy to Jesus. They want people to feel that they have the authority to tell people what they think God is saying. They act wrongly and instead of being an encouragement they cause people to hate the church and eventually these people go to look for solutions somewhere when they were just a click away to their answer."

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               Gregory DeVictorposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               Read and reread this article that discusses the proper capitalization of titles and headings:
               
               https://owlcation.com/humanities/Rules- … an-Article

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                  Gregory DeVictorposted 6 years agoin reply to this

                  Here is an example of a heading that is not in proper capitalization format:
                  
                  “The faith that broke the silence”
                  
                  Here is how it should be written:
                  
                  The Faith That Broke the Silence

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                     Gregory DeVictorposted 6 years agoin reply to this

                     You wrote:
                     
                     “In conclusion ,it is an encourage to know that when we pray we should believe that God has heard and that in due season we shall receive what we are looking for.”
                     
                     “In conclusion” does not need to be in bold characters.
                     
                     Remove the space after the word conclusion and before the comma.
                     
                     “In conclusion ,it is an encourage” does not make any sense at all.
                     
                     Like I’ve been saying, you must read and reread and reread all of the links that I have given you.

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                  Barbara Kayposted 6 years agoin reply to this

                  I hadn't even read the article when I noticed that you didn't use capitalization in your titles and subtitles. Get busy and correct all this.

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                     Justine Mulengaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

                     Thanks Barbara

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         Justine Mulengaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks very much. I am learning and with your help, I think I can make it.

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