I'd like feedback on my article: Article- good night sleep benefits

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  1. rubena profile image65
    rubenaposted 4 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Article-  good night sleep benefits

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    1. rubena profile image65
      rubenaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your valuable time..

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    2. Ben716 profile image90
      Ben716posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Rubena,
      Your article is too short. This will make it hard for search engines to index your articles among the first pages in search results. Hubpages recommends a minimum length of 800 words.
      This feedback is in addition to that of Rupert Taylor which I will not repeat because he has clearly explained the grammar errors.
      Work out on rewriting the article. You might want to utilize the free online grammar checkers/programs. A good example is ProWritingAid.
      You can post your rewritten article here on forum for further feedback and some help in editing our work.
      Good luck.

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      1. rubena profile image65
        rubenaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

        thanks a lot.. I will work on the same..

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 years ago

    There are a lot of grammar errors in your article.

    Here's a sentence with corrections below:

    "Many a time we listen from some exceptional people that 4 hours night sleep is much enough for them for their daily work routine ..."

    Better - Often we hear from people who say that four hour's sleep is enough for them to complete their daily routines ...

    Your title "Article- good night sleep benefits" is wrong. "Article" is unnecessary and the rest should be in Title Case i.e. "Benefits of a Good Night's Sleep."

    You have unnecessarily repeated your title in all lower case with a spelling error (should be benefits).

    You should not use underlining for an entire sentence or paragraph.

    The topic is covered thousands of times elsewhere on the Internet. With its poor-quality English yours is going to have a hard time getting traffic.

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