I'd like feedback on my article: A History of Western Herbalism Part II: The...

1. 74

   reddog1027posted 2 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks for any help you can give me on improving my article.  I do not have a good grasp of what makes a good article.  If there is anything that should be removed or improved on, please indicate what it is.  Carol
   Here is my article: A History of Western Herbalism Part II: The Middle East, the Link Between East and West.

   replyreport
   1. 94

      AliciaCposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi. I don't have time to go through the whole article, but I'll share some problems that I noticed.
      
      Your title is too long. Not all of it will appear in search engine results.
      
      You need to state the source and license of each photo to show that the images are suitable for use on this site.
      
      The Hippocrates section is completely underlined. I'm puzzled by "adfasdahjlh;' hkhpg" at the start of the Greece and Rome section.
      
      If you want to provide links to your other articles, they must be strongly related to the topic that you've discussed.
      
      The third footnote is listed three times.
      
      If you want to sell books from Amazon, you need to give information about their content and explain how they are related to your article.
      
      Good luck with editing the article.

      replyreport
      1. 74

         reddog1027posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Oops, my proofreading is not what it used to be or I was really tired.  Thx for taking the time and the VERY useful tips and corrections. Carol

         replyreport
   2. 70

      Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hey reddgo1027, you've write a wonderful article that's somehow complex in  history, sentence structure or tone. Many will find it had to digest.to decipher meanings here.
      
      Therefore, I believe you should do well by running your article through an online grammar editor or software called Grammarly. Get it free at www.grammarly.com/
      
      All the best to you.

      replyreport
      1. 74

         reddog1027posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thx. Miebakagh57, I will do just that.  Carol

         replyreport
         1. 70

            Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

            Good to noted, reddog.                                           Let me state here that  I'm a retired Administrative Officer, and keenly interested in food and nutrition. Hence, herbs and spices goes along with my foods. I'll be interest to read yuur edit. Thanks

            replyreport
2. 88

   theraggededgeposted 2 years ago

   You will find useful information at the Learning Center: https://hubpageshelp.com
   
   Start with this article: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … y-of-a-Hub There are three links at the end, which may also be helpful.

   replyreport
   1. 74

      reddog1027posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thx for sending me places to go to learn to write a better Hub.  Carol

      replyreport