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Higher than the Rooftop : Alone Together...

Updated on January 11, 2010
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thank you 96dpi's and thitchenson's flickr photostream

I felt something extraordinary as I climbed up the top. It was almost eight when I arrived. This is my rooftop and there is a frenzy part of me that don’t want to share it because it’s my haven when I want to be alone…But a tender part of my heart urges against and weakens my selfish thoughts every time I remember those blue eyes.


Tonight is gonna be different I know…I sighed.


He was there, my guest, already standing by my favorite spot. Felt the cold zephyr pulls me more toward that direction. He smiled at me and offered a familiar glass of frappe.


“You weren’t in the city so I guessed you’d miss a frappe.” He explained in advance.

“Thank you.” I said.


For a while we just sat there…having a casual conversation. Exchanging some bits bout ourselves. It wasn’t everything about him neither all of my life…what I’ve known was enough nonetheless.


He is a guy who has those looks that make women cry but his eyes tell the otherwise. More so after removing the mask on his face…If he were a song, he’d be the type I would like to hear over and over again but couldn’t find the real meaning as I listen til the end…I realized we sort of belong to the same song genre.


I don’t know if he knows he’s a total stunner. I don’t know if he’s aware I love gazing at his eyes more than at the stars now… I don’t know if he’s ever realized he’s more beautiful than the moon… I don’t know if what I’m feeling right now is just for tonight…


Ow, what a heavenly feeling, being in a soaring place under the stars…higher than everything and everyone else…For a while we just sat there…and for a while I’ve known him, I knew what’s gonna be different for tonight…I’m not alone…


And so I am sitting here, in this reserved rooftop…with someone…

We are alone…together…

I still feel it… but don’t know if he feels it, too…

I’m higher than the rooftop…




Previously on Higher than the Rooftop...


1 Fallin'...

2 Missing...

3 Lost in the Rain...

4 The Guest...



Up Next:


6 Your Silence...

7 The Kiss...

8 The Haze...

9 Fireworks...




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    • blaise25 profile image
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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      hi EIA! thank you.. :)

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      everything I am 7 years ago from vancouver

      That was nice :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you CM ;p

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      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      This is a very sweet read. Thanks!!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      wow, I'm so glad you felt everything Brands ;p

      yeah, like it too. As I said we belong to the same song genre..

      hope you'll read the next one, "Your Silence" and the other rooftop series as well ;p

      thanks a lot Brands! TC ;p

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      brandonfan 7 years ago from Mid West

      Awesome Blaise! I felt everything! Great analogies too. I liked how you described him as a song you could hear over and over, but never truly figure out what the HELL it's

      (or HE'S) about. I've met men like that before.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      happy to hear that cheeky girl :)

      thank you!

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      Cassandra Mantis 7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      This is interesting reading and well written. I like this a lot! : )

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      hmmm falling is always unexpected..love at first sight? for me, it's not first sight, I do believe in love at first STARE :p stare in the eyes..though it never happened to me yet LOL

      so what about the present? :p

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      PureRomance 7 years ago from Vietnam

      I meant my case ^ ^, i dont believe in love at first sight but i was once falling for someone unexpectedly. Anyway, its not in present tense...:P

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      @Micky

      thanks for stopping by again..have a safe trip always and enjoy ;p

      @Invictus

      it is an honor Invictus reads my works :) your poems are unconquered..

      @PureRomance

      I wonder what the first sentence means..share please LOL

      Thanks so much for your lovely insights. You're romantic, too. Your words speak from the heart.

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      PureRomance 7 years ago from Vietnam

      i love to look in his eyes and see how they can defeat the pride inside me...falling for someone is so sweet and tender and keep us dreaming in a fantastic world. You are so romantic. Keep writing the good works :)

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      well, the rooftop moments as so lovely... love the liitle wonders that go on.. you capture them beautifully... :)

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Nice rooftop, nice moment!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you carfire :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      I gotta say thanks a lot Invictus for always being there on my rooftop moments ;p if I'm right you were the first one to comment from the three of 'em :)

      Thank you! glad you love it

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      carfire77 7 years ago

      Vivid. You can sense the desire.

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      This is so suweet and magical, blaise! love it! :)