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Higher than the Rooftop : The Kiss

Updated on January 11, 2010
Photo credits: 96 dpi's and Daniel E Bruce's flickr photostream
Photo credits: 96 dpi's and Daniel E Bruce's flickr photostream

The butterflies still lurked inside my tummy, like nervousness and excitement collide. Couldn’t remember how long I’ve been feeling that every time I go up on my rooftop. But no weird things could stop me from going up here especially now that the nights are lovely and the stars completely shine…


I arrived when the night was still so young. I wanna do what I wanna do before he comes in. Because I know my mind would be on him…I sighed.


And because of it, I know I have to be careful... More so after that little show the last time we’ve been here. I still wonder what he feels about that…I mean, it is kinda obvious now what I feel about him. And because of it, I decided to be the one in silence for now…


He may be so sweet to me, and stares like I can’t be more beautiful than I do every time he stares at me…He may care about whatever I care…He may be kinda obvious but still there are things that have to be unfolded… And because of it, never felt the magic like this…of unwrapping what’s inside the heart til he came along…


I was standing under the moonlight, falling in love with the perfect night. The moon wasn’t in C, it was smiling, it was in U... I was gazing up when I felt someone’s hands covered my eyes.


“Sometimes I get so jealous of the stars.” He whispered.

“Don’t be, they only appear at night.” I said meeting his embrace.


Sometimes I think I could stay in his arms forever. Sometimes I wonder what makes me his little heaven…Sometimes I just wanna rock with him…


“In love with the stars?” Still he murmured.

I sighed…then smiled. “Yeah, always been.”

“Ah yeah, forgot they bring you to a place higher than this.”

“I thought they dazzle you, too.” I said.

“Not as much as you dazzle me…” He said staring at me.


I turned to walk towards the other corner. I wondered if he noticed how much I blushed. Apparently the cold wind made no effect. Something inside me was blazing and I felt it rising up as he comes closer.


“You know what’s higher than the rooftop?” He asked sincerely.

“What?”

“This….” His last word before he kissed me.


And so I was standing here, in this reserved rooftop…

Kissing him…

All the words that haven’t been said were spoken as his lips touch mine…

All the passions were unfolding…


And so I was standing here, in this reserved rooftop…

His lips brushin mine tenderly…

Like I’ll never be more beautiful again…


There was something bout his kiss…

Something that made me feel most safe all my life…


I remember he asked me if he could soar with me...

Now I know, I wanna soar with him...for real…


Suddenly, there’s more to higher than the rooftop…


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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      awwwww I love it! its so romantic! Things like that never happen to me.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Hello Team Cheeky! I'm glad my roofie hubs bring you a sweet ambiance to your rooftop apartment. I have to close my eyes now to leave you two soar to new heights LOL XO moi friends

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      Cassandra Mantis 7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      In our apartment, Astra? Oh, you mean the poem! Heh!

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      Cathy Nerujen 7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hahaha. I love this. We actually are in a rooftop apartment here, so you are right there. This is the right combination. LOL! Yes, I love the flow, it is so sweet and evocative. :) X

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Tingles and kisses, drinking the night and drinking each other :) Yup no words to quite describe what kisses bring. I hope you love the roofie flow moi friend. Thank you. :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      So wonderful and the way it tingles the tummy with the moment and the understated passion, very strange and has the underscore of more than kisses, more deeper still, and full of expectations...who knows what might happen...I am flowing along with this, and very much enjoying this fantastic journey with these poems...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      I gotta thank you Poet not only for commenting, but also for bringing me back in here :) Never thought I could miss this so much.. :)

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      oh to be higher than a rooftop, in the arms of a wonderful man and to be kissed, ahhhhhhhh lovely words, thanks

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      yah everyone's lookin for that..ow, hope it made you cry in a good way :) thank you, Justine!

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      Justine76 7 years ago

      to feel safe, and loved. what i think everyones looking for....man this one nearly made me cry...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      ow thank you KR! :)

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      Karen Russell 7 years ago

      I HAD ALREADY READ THIS HUB & ADMIRED IT YET, I DID NOT KNOW I HADN'T COMPLIMENTED YOU ON YOUR CRAFT, THANK YOU AGAIN...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you DH :)

      your story is lovely, too. I'll be on your chapter 2 after New Year's.. ;p Have a prosperous New Year my friend :)

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      Dark Heart 7 years ago

      Nice Blaise,I love following this relationship.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you gram :)

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      gramsmith 7 years ago

      Very sweet and nice hub.Thanks for this..............

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you Micky! TC

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Very nice - was like being there.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      yeah the finale will be next year ;p (which is few days to go)

      but the fireworks, ahh I'll do my best to hit New Year lol TNX!

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      Haha! As if these 2 need fireworks! :) Maybe it would be best if the finally was after New Year's eve.. something to ring beyond.. guess depends on their fate, eh? I will be there through the finale.. how could I not? Thanks, my friend! :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      hello there Invictus! :) thanks for the flattering comments! I have 3 more to go to complete a ten..but dunno if my fireworks would hit the New Year's eve..It's a pleasure writing these..hope you'll be there up to the finale :)

      thanks friend! :)

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      ah, but of course, a swarm of butterflies flutter.. Beautifully expressed. To claim as if to fall, seems quite a paradox.. when in actuality it feels more like being catapolted into the loop..

      Lovely, and to state, this series, no matter the final destination shall still breathe long after it's written.. Thanks for the treat! =)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thanks a lot for liking the series ;p

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      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      Another very sweet post!